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Who is My?
I talk of My heart I speak of My soul
But who is this ‘My’ the owner of all?
It isn’t the spirit because that’s My’s too
I wonder if you ponder the same as I do?
Is My some entity that dwells in the blue
Owning everything that is me and you
This realisation came as a jolt
Just what do I mean when I say it’s My fault?
Does that absolve me from all I do wrong?
I’m controlled by a My to whom I belong
If so this My has taken away
Any fear I might have of a last judgment day
Is there a My for everyone here
Or just one huge My a great overseer
I know this question might seem rather odd
But could this My be the person of God?
But who is this ‘My’ the owner of all?
It isn’t the spirit because that’s My’s too
I wonder if you ponder the same as I do?
Is My some entity that dwells in the blue
Owning everything that is me and you
This realisation came as a jolt
Just what do I mean when I say it’s My fault?
Does that absolve me from all I do wrong?
I’m controlled by a My to whom I belong
If so this My has taken away
Any fear I might have of a last judgment day
Is there a My for everyone here
Or just one huge My a great overseer
I know this question might seem rather odd
But could this My be the person of God?
Published 26th Jan 2013
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26th Jan 2013 5:52pm
26th Jan 2013 6:45pm
Thank you Nikki that's very kind of you.
My head works in a strange way sometimes. ;-)
My head works in a strange way sometimes. ;-)
Anonymous
27th Jan 2013 3:23pm
Wow. Food for thought but so deliciously penned. An interesting take on an age-old question some would deny, to the death, even thinking. Well Done Blocat!
27th Jan 2013 3:29pm
Thank you Scat your comments always show your understanding. TBH I didn't really expect any feedback for the very reason you mentioned!
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