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Civil In Barbaria
no one alive'among
us
capable of Taking
Note
of this great in'dustry- indeed,
no one recalls
if eversuch eXisted-
the Way[wayway]is so clear- each
sweetSelf sealed in
it's little orb made
of something not unlike stone-
yet some remember when you lived
th'ere wit 'me', our
skeletals clicking
each other thru th comfort
of skin.....managing, mannering,
'saving'
eachother's Life[s] from dour statistic-
then, like when none were looking to see
any thing, sav'ed life was left for dead
in middling amerika's
waste'collective
of individdled freedom-dee-dumdum, &
became ghost/ghostlike/
specter/ part-guy[of]
part-ghost and
a misbegotted,gentlepariah
'en Dada'
so bloody odd to them ranks a'filing by-
just another of mult'it'ude sadcircumstance
in Our massproduxion'd civility,
[ yOur quarantine of them old devils
breakinOnDown ]-
thee unthinkable
vanishing act
acted as if by involuntary
twitch or seizure or
perhaps merely
an inevitable error
of bein'human
when some poor body would'have,could'have,
should'have
justlike died
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us
capable of Taking
Note
of this great in'dustry- indeed,
no one recalls
if eversuch eXisted-
the Way[wayway]is so clear- each
sweetSelf sealed in
it's little orb made
of something not unlike stone-
yet some remember when you lived
th'ere wit 'me', our
skeletals clicking
each other thru th comfort
of skin.....managing, mannering,
'saving'
eachother's Life[s] from dour statistic-
then, like when none were looking to see
any thing, sav'ed life was left for dead
in middling amerika's
waste'collective
of individdled freedom-dee-dumdum, &
became ghost/ghostlike/
specter/ part-guy[of]
part-ghost and
a misbegotted,gentlepariah
'en Dada'
so bloody odd to them ranks a'filing by-
just another of mult'it'ude sadcircumstance
in Our massproduxion'd civility,
[ yOur quarantine of them old devils
breakinOnDown ]-
thee unthinkable
vanishing act
acted as if by involuntary
twitch or seizure or
perhaps merely
an inevitable error
of bein'human
when some poor body would'have,could'have,
should'have
justlike died
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Published 23rd Jan 2013
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26th Jan 2013 4:52am
Such a horribly wonderful piece, and the title is awesomely clever.
Would you mind if I shared this and a couple others of yours on other websites? I would of course give you full credit and link to your page on here.
Would you mind if I shared this and a couple others of yours on other websites? I would of course give you full credit and link to your page on here.
26th Jan 2013 1:07pm
grazie, cara.....
sweet praise indeed...
i'll 'trust' ye on the matter of catapulting my wordly per'formances to a wider audience, fotune, fame, etc.......
i'preciate yr appreciation
sweet praise indeed...
i'll 'trust' ye on the matter of catapulting my wordly per'formances to a wider audience, fotune, fame, etc.......
i'preciate yr appreciation
