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henpecked
I can't write the big one
because she'll read it
and
I can't pass that one off
as metaphor
because she'll read it
and
I can't pass that one off
as metaphor
Published 22nd Jan 2013
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Anonymous
22nd Jan 2013 9:43pm
yep fo' sho' lightbaron
strider
strider
23rd Jan 2013 4:00am
22nd Jan 2013 9:43pm
Aha ! There it is ! NOW it is going back in my reading list, and the "Ass" is getting it tonight with his mashed tators ;)
Perfect LB !
Perfect LB !
23rd Jan 2013 4:01am
23rd Jan 2013 1:07pm
This is a perfect, perfect example of what I was thinking about in terms of power in the spaces and what isn't said. I've been venting, lately, to my word processor, but that's exactly what not to do, and this is exactly what does it all sometimes. Love it.
23rd Jan 2013 2:23pm
im very happy that this works for ya...it is very much, if not completely about, whats not said... I do have to thank Maggie for giving me confidence enough to leave the bastard be...i wasnt, and maybe still am not completely convinced, that the wording is one hundred percent perfect, but i think the concept and spacing of the thing hold it together...thank ya very much Jesta
