The mind of a killer

Wow.. you know i had no idea how this was gonna end but you delivered it perfectly.. makes total sense.. thank you for your comments i appreciate them and much love ..

Yeah, the ending was kind of abrupt.lol Thanks for reading me.

Blake

wow! ummmmmmmm... wow!

haha thanks!

This has a very interesting perspective to me.

Enjoyed the read :)

Thank you, Maggie

This is fantastic!
Love the first stanza.

Very well written.

Thanks, scribbler:) I thought you would enjoy this one.

Liking this interpretation of the old story.  Good work.

old story? Was there an original story about this? I was unaware of that. Marilyn Manson kinda gave me inspiration to write this. He once said in one of his interviews that if you do something to the extreme, people will notice you.

This is the reasoning behind many public shootings, or even grand threats to kill, don't you think?

No diminishment of your work was intended.   :)

Right you are!  the columbine suspects were avid listeners to Marilyn manson, not that he had anything to do with the shootings. We're all responsible for our own actions, but the media has infact turned everyone against eachother. This can also pertain to assassinations as well. Thanks for your review:)

Great piece, short and acerbic, much to my taste with this one. :)

Cal

Glad it was to your liking:)

From the black rainbow (great symbolism) to the (the shining ) end (congratulations) which put me in mind of jack nickolson shoving his head through (surprise ) end
I  enjoyed this meander alongside the mind claiming (they made me do it... I get the concept of their excuse making but always wonder if it a fallacy (to get out of the blame).  Just being honest   Syn