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Release Me
I love your soft tender touch
The way you whisper in my ear full of desire
I give a gasp of sweet surrender
Take me to your bed tonight
Oh how I ache for you
Your passion fuels my fire
We need no spoken words
We have no promises to keep
We have no lies being told
We look back
with no regrets
Oh baby how I long for you
To hold me tight
Kiss me softly , I feel your passion
Such a perfect night
Everthing feels right
for a night full of passionate love making
But we have such precious little time
As you are vowed to another
Knowing that our tomarrow will bring
about such sweet sarrow
Thoughts of a brief moment of shame
All I take with me is a memory of one glorious night and
being released from my yearning passion for you!
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Re: Release Me
Anonymous
21st Jan 2013 9:11pm
DD~Sounds intense!
Nice write...Strider
Nice write...Strider
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21st Jan 2013 9:19pm
Re: Release Me
21st Jan 2013 9:43pm
This is so passionate, so intense, and filled with so much pure, raw fire! It reminds me of some of the songs I've been writing lately since I fell in love with my lovely Lily. Sometimes, you just want to sing out with all the joy in your heart, and shake the heaveans with it! This poem of yours certainly has that power. A truly glorious read! Keep the great poetry flowing. :)
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Re: Release Me
21st Jan 2013 9:51pm
Thank you Jessica for your wonderful comment.
Iam so glad you liked it.
DD
Iam so glad you liked it.
DD
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21st Jan 2013 11:04pm
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22nd Jan 2013 2:07am
This is really wonderful, DD. I love how passionate it is and how great it flows. Best of luck in the competition! :)
Faith
Faith
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Thank you so much Faith... Glad you liked it and thank you for the good wishes :)
DD
DD
Re: Release Me
22nd Jan 2013 6:45am
The longing comes out of the narrator quite strongly. Hot literary fling!
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2nd Dec 2013 9:59pm
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