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The Monster Crystal Meth
As we shot-up and smoke our
precious crystal meth, we get
our minds bright and clear.
our hearts starts racing like
a gray hound after running
a race no one knew the power it
had over me.i was always
paranoia peeking out windows.
moving my sack everywhere,
the crashing and burn is the
hardest part.
i would lie, steal, cheat,
what ever it took to get my
sad sack. i was up all night
franken tearing and trying
to fix every thing, i had
sores on my face and hands
i couldn.t hold a job
it controlled my every move
i knew i was going to have
impending illness, Theirs
no warning label on the sack
i prayed to get straight
but the demon was just to much
but i knew my treasures that lie
just beyond deaths doors
when i die their will be no story
to tell. peace and love go with you.
precious crystal meth, we get
our minds bright and clear.
our hearts starts racing like
a gray hound after running
a race no one knew the power it
had over me.i was always
paranoia peeking out windows.
moving my sack everywhere,
the crashing and burn is the
hardest part.
i would lie, steal, cheat,
what ever it took to get my
sad sack. i was up all night
franken tearing and trying
to fix every thing, i had
sores on my face and hands
i couldn.t hold a job
it controlled my every move
i knew i was going to have
impending illness, Theirs
no warning label on the sack
i prayed to get straight
but the demon was just to much
but i knew my treasures that lie
just beyond deaths doors
when i die their will be no story
to tell. peace and love go with you.
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Re: The Monster Crystal Meth
21st Jan 2013 9:53am
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25th Jan 2013 2:09pm
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27th Jan 2013 2:47am
Lived a similar life for 5 years just a different monster but everything else ,same same.. great job.
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Re: The Monster Crystal Meth
27th Jan 2013 9:54am
I'm looking at my glass filled with bubbles as I read your words..as well as feel the same as you...she's my only companion,I'm all alone no one cares,so I do my damage too,the pain stops and I write to fill the void,I'm a pathetic,useless,waste of space,so I feel your cries and helplessness and hope the best for you.. cause this is not living,it's full of false joys
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27th Jan 2013 6:06pm
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29th Jan 2013 00:49am
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30th Jan 2013 5:17am
The person in this poem needs an outside force to dry them out? maybe like getting stranded on an island and living off of coconuts and fish.
Sure is a red flag for anybody curious about that stuff.
Thanks.
Sure is a red flag for anybody curious about that stuff.
Thanks.
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30th Jan 2013 6:25am
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