Dawn of Time

Stunning Ink, Jessica!
I really enjoyed reading this! :)

Thanks, Rain! Super happy you enjoyed my song. :D

Very enchanting song,Jessica! such a delight to just follow the lovely stream of words. A string of pearls!!!

Thanks, Mourganna! This was a delightful song for me to write, and one of my deeper ones too. ;)

Oh man, this is way cool.

Really love this.

Pen on, please!

Tidespotter

Thanks! What can I say? I'm a girl who can rock! *Giggle* So happy you liked my song.

This is a sweet poem.Your display of emtions through words is colorful and your imagery sublime.

I try my best, Flame! Very happy to read your lovely comment. :D

Ms. Kou_Indigo,

    The Dawn of Time piece is truly heart accepting ah timeless. This is an ah wonderful ah floature ah line for ah line. I've tried to tell u it all. Things only gods can know.....even though I'm just a girl. But I've heard the angels call! As above so below.....let me give u the world. And when the day is done, we'll make love in the Dawn. The Dawn of time.....oh the Dawn of time. This stanza is so.....here are my eyes, my hair, oh my ah lips to know thine ah kisses and ah touches. This ah poem was ah nicely ah crafted and ah penned! Flourescence!!!!! 👍👁️🥥🧅👄🤜🤛

I am glad it flows so well all throughout, as I had originally conceived of this as a song meant to be sung... one of several that I wrote back around the time when I wrote this one. I was on a musical kick for a bit, and a lot of my poetry from that phase of mine has a very musical quality and flow to it because of that. I am happy to see that this poem has the sort of timelessness that enables people to enjoy it even after so much time has passed since its' creation! :)

And! Ah thank u for this ah creation!👁️🤍🤎🍺👄