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you are my love is all i knew
dy i sw u,
u wr stndng in frnt of few,,
i ws nt able 2 sy nytng 2 u,,
Cz frm dt dy u bcme my crush is ol i knew..
Soon d Tym ws passng awy,
mny tyms thr wre fights,
i trd 2 slve thm in ny way,.
Ntng ws btwn me n u,,
bt u wr my crush is ol i knw..
2008 brght a new ray,,
d dte ws dec 28,,
i smwt realsd hw spcl ws me 2 u,
i strtd lvng,,
u ws my crsh n bcme my swthrt is ol i knew..
u wre my sistrs bf,smhw i cm 2 knw,,
i flt vry lw,
wd few msundrstnds u lft hr fr a new grl,,
i rlzd u wre nt fr me as wl as fr hr,,
i ddnt xpct ths frm u,
cz u wr my swthrt is ol i knew..
bt thn i dnt knw y,
gd gftd me d bst gft,
2009 arvd wd d july 30th,.
u prpsd me wd ur swt hrt,, thr wr 2 grlfrnds of u,
yt my ans ws ys, as i cnt hrt u,
coz u wre my lv is ol i knew..
she ws brkn frm insde.,
u lft hr wdot ny fite,,
sis tld me abt hr n u,,
evrytng, a litle or a fw,
bt stl u wre my luv is ol i knw
fr me u broke up wd d othr,
bt ptchd up wd my sistr,,
i cnt break my sistr's hrt n cnt broke up wd u,
coz u wr my lyf is ol i knew..
nw cmpltng 4 yrs wd me, n 7 wd my sistr,,
u dnt dre to thnk abt ny othr..
she n i lv u lyk nytng,,
u tke both of us as evrytng,,
lyf is gng smth wd u, coz u wr my swthrt is ol i knw,,
nw also she dnt knw nytng, bt i knew evrytng,,
mny tngs u do wd hr, whch i dnt wn to c, bt i hv 2,,
seeing u wd hr is nw a habt fr me,,
bt deep in my hrt u cnt c,,thr is a lt of pain n angr in me.,
whch i cnt shw u, coz u my lv is ol i knew..
u also lv me lyk nytng i knew,,
bt thrs alt of pain in my hrt nt a ltle or a few,,
no futr is wd u, coz i cnt let my sistr brkn fr u,,
Bt stl u wre my lv is ol i knw..
i wnt ntng jst a ltle lv frm u,,
whch u gve me a lot mre thn few,,
m ready 2 die fr u,,
coz nw u r my love, lyf n evrytng is ol i knew..
u wr stndng in frnt of few,,
i ws nt able 2 sy nytng 2 u,,
Cz frm dt dy u bcme my crush is ol i knew..
Soon d Tym ws passng awy,
mny tyms thr wre fights,
i trd 2 slve thm in ny way,.
Ntng ws btwn me n u,,
bt u wr my crush is ol i knw..
2008 brght a new ray,,
d dte ws dec 28,,
i smwt realsd hw spcl ws me 2 u,
i strtd lvng,,
u ws my crsh n bcme my swthrt is ol i knew..
u wre my sistrs bf,smhw i cm 2 knw,,
i flt vry lw,
wd few msundrstnds u lft hr fr a new grl,,
i rlzd u wre nt fr me as wl as fr hr,,
i ddnt xpct ths frm u,
cz u wr my swthrt is ol i knew..
bt thn i dnt knw y,
gd gftd me d bst gft,
2009 arvd wd d july 30th,.
u prpsd me wd ur swt hrt,, thr wr 2 grlfrnds of u,
yt my ans ws ys, as i cnt hrt u,
coz u wre my lv is ol i knew..
she ws brkn frm insde.,
u lft hr wdot ny fite,,
sis tld me abt hr n u,,
evrytng, a litle or a fw,
bt stl u wre my luv is ol i knw
fr me u broke up wd d othr,
bt ptchd up wd my sistr,,
i cnt break my sistr's hrt n cnt broke up wd u,
coz u wr my lyf is ol i knew..
nw cmpltng 4 yrs wd me, n 7 wd my sistr,,
u dnt dre to thnk abt ny othr..
she n i lv u lyk nytng,,
u tke both of us as evrytng,,
lyf is gng smth wd u, coz u wr my swthrt is ol i knw,,
nw also she dnt knw nytng, bt i knew evrytng,,
mny tngs u do wd hr, whch i dnt wn to c, bt i hv 2,,
seeing u wd hr is nw a habt fr me,,
bt deep in my hrt u cnt c,,thr is a lt of pain n angr in me.,
whch i cnt shw u, coz u my lv is ol i knew..
u also lv me lyk nytng i knew,,
bt thrs alt of pain in my hrt nt a ltle or a few,,
no futr is wd u, coz i cnt let my sistr brkn fr u,,
Bt stl u wre my lv is ol i knw..
i wnt ntng jst a ltle lv frm u,,
whch u gve me a lot mre thn few,,
m ready 2 die fr u,,
coz nw u r my love, lyf n evrytng is ol i knew..
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Re: you are my love is all i knew
14th Jan 2013 7:34am
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14th Jan 2013 7:45am
Re: you are my love is all i knew
14th Jan 2013 10:08am
A very sweet poem made so difficult to read. But thank goodness I could read between the lines and realize you got more than what you wanted. Nice poem missy.
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re: Re: you are my love is all i knew
14th Jan 2013 10:30am
Re: you are my love is all i knew
16th Jan 2013 3:27am
Brilliant mind. I could read all of it. I like the way you thought to do this. Thanks for sharing.
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re: Re: you are my love is all i knew
19th Feb 2013 5:20am
Re: you are my love is all i knew
18th Feb 2013 3:52pm
I can see that I'm going to need to brush up on my text speak. For the uninitiated, it's rather like hieroglyphics, but then again, I do love a challenge!
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19th Feb 2013 5:24am
Re: you are my love is all i knew
20th Feb 2013 1:46am
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21st Feb 2013 3:42pm
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re: Re: you are my love is all i knew
21st Feb 2013 3:43pm
Re: you are my love is all i knew
23rd Feb 2013 7:28am
I feel you,I really do,but please,please,please,don't shorten your vocabulary.It lessens the emotion...Of course,in my opinion.
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re: Re: you are my love is all i knew
23rd Feb 2013 7:54am
yyaaa i will surely and definately will take care of it..... and thanks i truly appreciate your comment...
Re: you are my love is all i knew
23rd Feb 2013 8:42am
I like the scribe, keep it up, raw emotion
This bit
she ws brkn frm insde.,
Best wishes
Ricecake
This bit
she ws brkn frm insde.,
Best wishes
Ricecake
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re: Re: you are my love is all i knew
23rd Feb 2013 11:15am
Re: you are my love is all i knew
28th Feb 2013 10:21am
Awesome write. Difficult for me to read but I enjoyed it none the less. Keep'em coming.
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re: Re: you are my love is all i knew
4th Mar 2013 8:30am
Re: you are my love is all i knew
Anonymous
4th Mar 2013 6:45am
Also admit it was a challenge to read at first, til I adjusted to it..then it was found to have a deep beauty! well done....
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re: Re: you are my love is all i knew
4th Mar 2013 8:29am
you are my love is all i knew
7th Mar 2013 3:36am
re: you are my love is all i knew
7th Mar 2013 4:22am
Re: you are my love is all i knew
7th Mar 2013 3:42pm
We do tend to give it all away...and this is how we come to have so much to say....
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7th Mar 2013 4:29pm
Re: you are my love is all i knew
8th Apr 2013 2:04pm
Your first you say?
You have a good eye/ear for the words to say. Just take your time and you wil do fine the words are yours they can not ever be right or wrong.
The text script is difficult to read, in deed
Good job of the expression, emotion and all together a good write.
You have a good eye/ear for the words to say. Just take your time and you wil do fine the words are yours they can not ever be right or wrong.
The text script is difficult to read, in deed
Good job of the expression, emotion and all together a good write.
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re: Re: you are my love is all i knew
8th Apr 2013 7:41pm
Re: you are my love is all i knew
9th Apr 2013 4:28pm
I can feel the warmth in this poem, i wihope you have the best of luck, it was beautiful!!:)
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10th Apr 2013 2:23pm