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New Year's Eve again please
It wasn't what I thought it would be
just a fuck sealed with a goodbye kiss
he was an experienced man
with big hands and a decent size cock
he licked me slow and good
did things to my body I didn't know could be done
but what I remember most was the first time he entered me
I felt a jolt in my stomach
tingling all the way to my toes
cummed all over him right there
I felt shy
so I grabbed his mouth for the most sensual kiss
bit his lip a little
sucked his tongue
played with those lips
whispering into his mouth
as he moved over me
you feel so fucking good
my god
he was driving me mad with his
grey eyes and perfect body
Hardening that kiss
he took me back to the top
I took him with me
and we crashed into pure bliss
Like I've been saying
I'm keeping him
just a fuck sealed with a goodbye kiss
he was an experienced man
with big hands and a decent size cock
he licked me slow and good
did things to my body I didn't know could be done
but what I remember most was the first time he entered me
I felt a jolt in my stomach
tingling all the way to my toes
cummed all over him right there
I felt shy
so I grabbed his mouth for the most sensual kiss
bit his lip a little
sucked his tongue
played with those lips
whispering into his mouth
as he moved over me
you feel so fucking good
my god
he was driving me mad with his
grey eyes and perfect body
Hardening that kiss
he took me back to the top
I took him with me
and we crashed into pure bliss
Like I've been saying
I'm keeping him
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Re: New Year's Eve again please
1st Jan 2013 11:54pm
The Ball really did drop on New Years Eve.
....Hardening that kiss .....
....Hardening that kiss .....
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re: Re: New Year's Eve again please
2nd Jan 2013 00:03am
Re: New Year's Eve again please
Anonymous
2nd Jan 2013 00:38am
thats just fuckin awesome!!!!!
at least someone got some ;)
great write...or should I say, thanks for sharing the memory lol
at least someone got some ;)
great write...or should I say, thanks for sharing the memory lol

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re: Re: New Year's Eve again please
2nd Jan 2013 00:40am
Re: New Year's Eve again please
2nd Jan 2013 2:27am
re: Re: New Year's Eve again please
2nd Jan 2013 2:32am
gg, your filthy writing style...
2nd Jan 2013 3:22am
...is working for you. There is enough humanity and honesty in this for it to be a good little poem, with story line well held to keep us living it with you. Very tender.
You've come a long way from 2 years ago (or whatever it was) gg
hh
You've come a long way from 2 years ago (or whatever it was) gg
hh
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re: gg, your filthy writing style...
2nd Jan 2013 3:29am
Re: New Year's Eve again please
2nd Jan 2013 4:46am
Nice. You got fucked. I slept with two dogs and woke up with a hangover. Fucked but in a much less satisfactory way.
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re: Re: New Year's Eve again please
2nd Jan 2013 5:05am
Re: New Year's Eve again please
2nd Jan 2013 9:16am
I like the contrast with the explicit description and then
"I felt shy"
Thanks for sharing that, Gigi.
;)
"I felt shy"
Thanks for sharing that, Gigi.
;)
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re: Re: New Year's Eve again please
2nd Jan 2013 1:22pm
Re: New Year's Eve again please
2nd Jan 2013 11:58am
o, dear shy gg,
y keeps wee boys
cmmng
wit thee
revelry*
*(whathfck is that crustyoldprick talkin'bout anyway? --- must be dainbramaged)
y keeps wee boys
cmmng
wit thee
revelry*
*(whathfck is that crustyoldprick talkin'bout anyway? --- must be dainbramaged)
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re: Re: New Year's Eve again please
2nd Jan 2013 1:23pm
re: re: Re: New Year's Eve again please
2nd Jan 2013 3:35pm
heh,heh...did ye hear that Beavis. she said 'wisdom'. heh,heh....
right on thee rites of on....
read closely,attentively,(+lovingly), & 'my' wisdom shall be thine....
perhaps 'I' will have no further 'use' of it
right on thee rites of on....
read closely,attentively,(+lovingly), & 'my' wisdom shall be thine....
perhaps 'I' will have no further 'use' of it
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re: re: re: Re: New Year's Eve again please
3rd Jan 2013 00:12am
Re: New Year's Eve again please
2nd Jan 2013 5:33pm
Shy? Did i see the word inserted with ease into this creative literotica
I can see wild or temptress
Naughty and nice all rolled into one climatic poem
Er what im saying was xD xD
I can see wild or temptress
Naughty and nice all rolled into one climatic poem
Er what im saying was xD xD
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re: Re: New Year's Eve again please
3rd Jan 2013 00:13am
Re: New Year's Eve again please
First 2 lines ambiguous and may not easily make sense to the unfamiliar reader - do you mean in the second line that you got what you expected or do you mean that was all that turned out when you were expecting much more? (The tone of the rest of the poem suggests the first if I read correctly.)
Given the setting, it looks like a scene straight out of "Sex and the City".
Given the setting, it looks like a scene straight out of "Sex and the City".
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re: Re: New Year's Eve again please
3rd Jan 2013 00:15am
Sex was in the city but not New York City.. It means I was expected the usual and got surprised. It kinda fits with the poem before this one in away. I set my mind to go out and fuck but I turned out different. Anyways thanks xoox
Re: New Year's Eve again please
3rd Jan 2013 00:20am
You know what I like most about your writing Gigi? That very strong, and yet very "female" voice. Personally I think it is too easy in writing to take on the "man" role. But to stand mighty, and erect, yet breasts thrust full out is another matter.
You do it well Hun :)
You do it well Hun :)
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re: Re: New Year's Eve again please
3rd Jan 2013 00:24am
Re: New Year's Eve again please
3rd Jan 2013 8:55pm
Awesome work. I am currently writing a romance book and will feature a section on erotic/romantic poetry. IF you want to be apart just send me a private message along with this poem.All credit will be given to you.
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re: Re: New Year's Eve again please
3rd Jan 2013 9:31pm