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Hate and Love
Hate like a talon
Golden band on finger
tight vice of lies
thistles on the brows
Dawns of utopian dreams
That never goes beyond day
Fed with careless whispers
From tongue that wags
Empty promises
Hate that grows
From hurts that bind
A hand held growing warmer
Hell grows as molten lips
Kisses the tears
Whispering regrets
Today’s sorry
Becomes tomorrow’s deceits
Filing more hurt hates
Love blooms where it should
Forgiveness and compassion given
Tolerance of errors
Rises from below
The bitterness turns
To emptiness
Hence filling with love
Unconditionally tasteless
Love without needs
Kiss the hands
That slaps the cheeks
Bow at old love and admit defeat
Love grows
Sprinkled with rain
Tears of gladness at the refrain
Of love lost but re-discovered
With red ribbons the rainbow bound
A new love found
Golden band on finger
tight vice of lies
thistles on the brows
Dawns of utopian dreams
That never goes beyond day
Fed with careless whispers
From tongue that wags
Empty promises
Hate that grows
From hurts that bind
A hand held growing warmer
Hell grows as molten lips
Kisses the tears
Whispering regrets
Today’s sorry
Becomes tomorrow’s deceits
Filing more hurt hates
Love blooms where it should
Forgiveness and compassion given
Tolerance of errors
Rises from below
The bitterness turns
To emptiness
Hence filling with love
Unconditionally tasteless
Love without needs
Kiss the hands
That slaps the cheeks
Bow at old love and admit defeat
Love grows
Sprinkled with rain
Tears of gladness at the refrain
Of love lost but re-discovered
With red ribbons the rainbow bound
A new love found
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31st Dec 2012 1:30am
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31st Dec 2012 1:38am
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31st Dec 2012 1:42am
Re: Hate and Love
Anonymous
31st Dec 2012 2:19am
I loved the line:
From tongue that wags
Empty promises
and the poem is so true:
Kiss the hands
That slaps the cheeks
Who fools us most?
Our need for love
Good poem, good read, good write
Grace-full
From tongue that wags
Empty promises
and the poem is so true:
Kiss the hands
That slaps the cheeks
Who fools us most?
Our need for love
Good poem, good read, good write
Grace-full
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31st Dec 2012 2:38am
As usual your insight is incredible. Thank you for reading and leaving an encouraging comment, dear Kitty.
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Anonymous
31st Dec 2012 11:30am
Part two just as nice grace...strider
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31st Dec 2012 4:40pm
Re: Hate and Love
1st Jan 2013 5:41am
Love is indeed like unto a molten crucible in which love is either forged or broken, only to be forged anew when the time is right. True words are in this poem, and heartfelt ones also! Beautiful poetry as always, my friend. :)
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2nd Jan 2013 1:16am
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1st Jan 2013 5:27pm
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2nd Jan 2013 1:17am
Re: Hate and Love
26th Jan 2013 10:30pm
Such a sad write and filled with truths known by many here
You add hope at the end
I hope its Your begining
Keep it alive Dear Gra e
You are an artist of the highest caliber!!!
You add hope at the end
I hope its Your begining
Keep it alive Dear Gra e
You are an artist of the highest caliber!!!
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26th Jan 2013 11:20pm
Love lost and to love and lost again , story of my life, dear Soul. If you can read the diary of my mind you could write an encyclopedia on Grace 's world of errors and blunders . Haha...
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27th Jan 2013 1:10am
I am truly right there with ya Grace!!!
Twice for I
( some of my ramblings expose them too)
ALWAYS keep hope for people of the good soul...we gotta win sometime right???
Twice for I
( some of my ramblings expose them too)
ALWAYS keep hope for people of the good soul...we gotta win sometime right???
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27th Jan 2013 12:21pm
If you don't win at first you try again...if it does not work, you keep on trying. At least you would have love and lost and love and lost and ....:D
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27th Jan 2013 6:24pm
I believe it is to be found kept and treasured...I HAVE to believe it is always a one sided street ...
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28th Jan 2013 3:15am
Each one you touch, part of them stays with you...no matter how many of them you have touched. Its in different ways, different time and circumstances but within your life's journey you would have loved much.
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11th Feb 2013 11:44pm
I have usually kept to myself. I find here the depth of my error. I have stumbled into a most beautiful, honest, and powerfully keen intellect. Thank you for this respite, Grace.
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re: Re: Hate and Love
11th Feb 2013 11:57pm
Hi Gregory , don't be an island. Thank you for reading and leaving that kind comment .