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refelcted water
medows of darkness
dancing trees,
with evil laughter
screaming bees
burning roses
bloody water
your reflection is a white face
stiches along your face
cold hard black eyes
looking back at you
telling you everything is okay
quickly the reflection is now a joyus little girl with pigtails
suddenly she's no longer little she's now dead
because your sould is dead
dancing trees,
with evil laughter
screaming bees
burning roses
bloody water
your reflection is a white face
stiches along your face
cold hard black eyes
looking back at you
telling you everything is okay
quickly the reflection is now a joyus little girl with pigtails
suddenly she's no longer little she's now dead
because your sould is dead
Published 26th Jul 2010
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2nd Aug 2010 3:53pm
a lot of misspelling, don't know if it is intentional. beginning and middle are fine, but the ending needs work. if it is supposed to inspire guilt in someone, make it more heart wrenching in reference to the little girl.is the little girl the author or is this narrated by an onlooker. has potential.
