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What She Wears (for Magdalena)
Beneath what clings
To her breasts and thighs
What she gives to me
Fabrics and dyes.
Subtly tucked
In the folds
That she wears
Nestled
And beveled
And shaded with cares.
These do not cover
Or hold back her charms
Nothing so tangibly
Escaping my arms.
Into the depth of her
Passion and grace
Moving through
Boundaries
Footwear and lace.
Having her here
On the tip
Of my tongue
A word from her lips
And my banquet begun.
Nothing she wears
Keeps back
My passion
For swallowing
Whole is
My tip to fashion.
To her breasts and thighs
What she gives to me
Fabrics and dyes.
Subtly tucked
In the folds
That she wears
Nestled
And beveled
And shaded with cares.
These do not cover
Or hold back her charms
Nothing so tangibly
Escaping my arms.
Into the depth of her
Passion and grace
Moving through
Boundaries
Footwear and lace.
Having her here
On the tip
Of my tongue
A word from her lips
And my banquet begun.
Nothing she wears
Keeps back
My passion
For swallowing
Whole is
My tip to fashion.
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Re: What She Wears (for Magdalena)
28th Dec 2012 9:16pm
*wolf whistles*
This is good! Lol magdalena should be very flattered. Slight spelling mistake on 'escaping' though
This is good! Lol magdalena should be very flattered. Slight spelling mistake on 'escaping' though
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re: Re: What She Wears (for Magdalena)
28th Dec 2012 9:28pm
One finger picked broken sholder surgery drugs and all on a cell phone say its not flattery but rather sheer hormones that are writing in spite of constraints....maddening vixen....tears my eyes out by the roots with her transfixing words!
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28th Dec 2012 9:50pm
Still on meds? Feel better soon, rt.
Liking the flow of this one, although there is something elusive threaded throughout.
Liking the flow of this one, although there is something elusive threaded throughout.
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28th Dec 2012 10:19pm
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re: Re: What She Wears (for Magdalena)
28th Dec 2012 10:21pm
Re: What She Wears (for Magdalena)
Anonymous
28th Dec 2012 10:34pm
Couldn't have said it better myself, rt.
Strider :)
Strider :)

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re: Re: What She Wears (for Magdalena)
28th Dec 2012 11:58pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 29th Dec 2012 1:53am
29th Dec 2012 1:52am
RT~ Oh, I can read your code. It's cute and cryptic.
Really, a stellar tribute poem!
Strider :)
http://www.buygiftstoindia.com/uploaded_files/prod/by_vendors/kiran_teddy/300x300/heart%20pink%20soft%20teddy%20bear%2025.jpg
Really, a stellar tribute poem!
Strider :)
http://www.buygiftstoindia.com/uploaded_files/prod/by_vendors/kiran_teddy/300x300/heart%20pink%20soft%20teddy%20bear%2025.jpg

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29th Dec 2012 2:44am
Re: What She Wears (for Magdalena)
28th Dec 2012 10:36pm
Echo Lily Mae here, although ('spoilsport' I hear) it doesn't follow the picture that went with the inspiring poem was of Magdalena!
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re: Re: What She Wears (for Magdalena)
29th Dec 2012 00:03am
I have seen through her every gentle diguise that she has adopteed, a siren whose words seduce us into love's madness...I resisted ....as long as I could.....
Re: What She Wears (for Magdalena)
28th Dec 2012 10:47pm
Flattered rt that my poem would inspire such a write.
Also by the comments :)
Also by the comments :)
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re: Re: What She Wears (for Magdalena)
28th Dec 2012 11:57pm
Simply sharing that long before your clothing kicks in, your words as formed on your lips have already drawn a reponse.
You require no adornment to have succeeded.
You require no adornment to have succeeded.
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29th Dec 2012 4:26am
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Re: What She Wears (for Magdalena)
29th Dec 2012 7:11am
I can relate to this poem because when winter comes around I have to wear layers upon layers of clothes just to keep warm, including blankets draped around me. Certainly not the prettiest sight for my man looking at me but hopefully he knows -- just like you-- what's underneath. :)
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Re: What She Wears (for Magdalena)
31st Dec 2012 1:47am
What DID she wear..? you think, I should have one too? (haha!) I know, I noticed Magdalena's poems a long time ago and I loved them. beautiful soul.
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re: Re: What She Wears (for Magdalena)
31st Dec 2012 1:51am
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/83900-posed-in-lace/
She leaves my lip dragging on the ground.....
She leaves my lip dragging on the ground.....