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Enter my world!

they give away my secrets,
my fears,
my flaws,
and my thoughts.
They surrender to hurt.
they POP, depending on the color of my shirt.
people say they are gorgeous.
to me, they appear hopeless.
responsive, deffinately !
answers lie there.
but deeply.
look unto them, take a journey.
what youll see, is not ordinary.
impressive? maybe.
look further.
hypnotizing? mesmerizing?
always seemingly to be crying !
are they yet striking???
do you see the hurt?
the painful broken heart?
deep in the center. . . . .
into my world you'll soon enter.
Written by moosgirl16
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