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grows
Is it
twisted reasoning
that grows between
the cracks
of your broken thoughts
when you look at
a reflection
that tells you
your wrong
twisted reasoning
that grows between
the cracks
of your broken thoughts
when you look at
a reflection
that tells you
your wrong
Published 20th Dec 2012
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Anonymous
6th Feb 2013 1:44pm
Cool poem.
Love your thought patterns....
Small observation, if I may?
*your wrong
(in this context, first word ought to be ..."you're"....maybe?)
Keep at it!
Tidespotter
Ps. No question mark at end? Just a query...
Love your thought patterns....
Small observation, if I may?
*your wrong
(in this context, first word ought to be ..."you're"....maybe?)
Keep at it!
Tidespotter
Ps. No question mark at end? Just a query...
6th Feb 2013 2:23pm
