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Tell me I知 beautiful
Tell me I知 beautiful
And I will bare myself
Golden flesh
Plump, ripe fruit
For you to harvest
A sustainable feast
To indulge your appetite.
Tell me I知 beautiful
And I will open to you
Wet and wild
A torrential flooding
A raging river
To swim in or drown.
Tell me I知 beautiful
And I will surrender to you
Open my limbs
To four corners
Submit to your eyes
Your hands, your manhood
Your radiant vision.
Tell me I知 beautiful
And I will open this doorway
Damp, cavernous passage
Smooth, slick walls
For you to slip into for your endless exploration.
Tell me I知 beautiful.
And I will bare myself
Golden flesh
Plump, ripe fruit
For you to harvest
A sustainable feast
To indulge your appetite.
Tell me I知 beautiful
And I will open to you
Wet and wild
A torrential flooding
A raging river
To swim in or drown.
Tell me I知 beautiful
And I will surrender to you
Open my limbs
To four corners
Submit to your eyes
Your hands, your manhood
Your radiant vision.
Tell me I知 beautiful
And I will open this doorway
Damp, cavernous passage
Smooth, slick walls
For you to slip into for your endless exploration.
Tell me I知 beautiful.
Published 15th Dec 2012
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15th Dec 2012 8:18am
We definitely want to be beautiful to the people we love despite our flaws. That type of love is extremely erotic albeit hard to come by at times.
You saw the connection between being perceived as beautiful and opening up sexually. Great poetry!
You saw the connection between being perceived as beautiful and opening up sexually. Great poetry!
15th Dec 2012 3:18pm
Awesome poem!! I love how you take beautiful and present a vulnerable side in each grouping!! wonderful!!
Echo scarletvelvet. It makes the male reader want to answer "You are!" and speak to her further through his hands. Love the fruity description of her body in paragraph one - reminds me of words of Lover in Song of Songs chapter 7 verses 7-8:
"..your breasts [are] like clusters of fruit. I said "I will climb the palm tree, I will take hold of its fruit." May your breasts be like the clusters of the vine.."
"..your breasts [are] like clusters of fruit. I said "I will climb the palm tree, I will take hold of its fruit." May your breasts be like the clusters of the vine.."
17th Dec 2012 4:49pm
17th Dec 2012 5:56pm
Oh yes! Totally reminds me of "Make Me Say It Again Girl", by the Isley Brothers. I discovered the group visiting my brother in college one summer. He got so tired of hearing me play their tunes.
15th Jan 2013 3:09am
You are definitely "beautiful"..Flowing like Pharell and Snoop. LOL
Nice Touch : )
Nice Touch : )
