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Unwrapping Your Toys
When I press your button on the left
You peep with a itsy-bitsy squeek
And then caress the button to the right
Your fluffy bear begins to speak
When I push the button in your belly
You up and down like Whinnie the pooh
But if I touch the one down there
That hides beaneath your curly hair
After teasing you for an endless hour
It's then I hear your Tigger RAWRRR
You peep with a itsy-bitsy squeek
And then caress the button to the right
Your fluffy bear begins to speak
When I push the button in your belly
You up and down like Whinnie the pooh
But if I touch the one down there
That hides beaneath your curly hair
After teasing you for an endless hour
It's then I hear your Tigger RAWRRR
Published 10th Dec 2012
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10th Dec 2012 1:30pm
10th Dec 2012 1:33pm
Thank you G! That's got to be the fastest comment I have ever gotten after writing a poem. I was just about to sign off and go back to bed. I woke up from a dream and wrote that. It was a wild dream in deed...! JJ
Anonymous
5th Apr 2013 12:36pm
I like this..madly original. Could stand as highly metaphorical or just plain fun..either way, no complaints here :-)
Nice pen!
Nice pen!
Thanks Miki! Ideas were just popping into my head after I woke up from a dream and I decided to have fun with them. :) JJ
8th May 2013 7:42am
8th May 2013 7:44am
