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The Monster Within
Picking the black petals of my life
casting them carelessy into the sea
not giving a fuck
it feels sublime letting go
watching the sea foam absorb all hope
the madness won't end so I sucumb
the voices ringing in my ears
such as Ted Bundy
whispering me putrid secrets of death
all the while tickling my fancy
i'm a monster of the hoarde
falling into their scorching embrace
I protest to no avail
my destiny before me
I wither in their grasp
mouth gasping for air
as they take my faith and eat it as if it were candy
falling forever falling into the pit
calling to heaven but only finding hell
deny your master they say with razor tongues
slashing me and appeasing me at once
the devil's concubine
with stars in my eyes
evil to the core please heaven save me
from the monster that lies within
or I will perish forever
Ted's little toy to kill for all eternity
casting them carelessy into the sea
not giving a fuck
it feels sublime letting go
watching the sea foam absorb all hope
the madness won't end so I sucumb
the voices ringing in my ears
such as Ted Bundy
whispering me putrid secrets of death
all the while tickling my fancy
i'm a monster of the hoarde
falling into their scorching embrace
I protest to no avail
my destiny before me
I wither in their grasp
mouth gasping for air
as they take my faith and eat it as if it were candy
falling forever falling into the pit
calling to heaven but only finding hell
deny your master they say with razor tongues
slashing me and appeasing me at once
the devil's concubine
with stars in my eyes
evil to the core please heaven save me
from the monster that lies within
or I will perish forever
Ted's little toy to kill for all eternity
Published 9th Dec 2012
| Edited 26th Aug 2015
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9th Dec 2012 9:43pm
16th Dec 2012 1:11am
Anonymous
9th Dec 2012 9:56pm
Crimsin...I was living in Tallahassee when this happened...I had a friend who visually ID' Bundy in the Chi Omeg house.
Crazy person Ted was.
A nice write...considering the evil.
Strider
Crazy person Ted was.
A nice write...considering the evil.
Strider
16th Dec 2012 1:12am
Interesting you were so close to the case via your friend..ty for the kind comment..peace Crim
9th Dec 2012 10:38pm
I feel there is much depth within your words.
A dark piece indeed laced with the presence of evil.
Powerful pen Crim. Wishing you well :)
A dark piece indeed laced with the presence of evil.
Powerful pen Crim. Wishing you well :)
16th Dec 2012 1:13am
Yes Magdalena there is much evil here..I just pray to be delivered from it..ty peace Crim
10th Dec 2012 6:26am
all the while tickling my fancy
i'm a monster of the hoarde
falling into their scorching embrace.. touch me baby girl with your demented yet innocent embrace. You are a strong poetess and i love and respect you. your poetry inspires me sadens me and moves me.
i'm a monster of the hoarde
falling into their scorching embrace.. touch me baby girl with your demented yet innocent embrace. You are a strong poetess and i love and respect you. your poetry inspires me sadens me and moves me.
16th Dec 2012 1:14am
My beautiful and dark Mistress I feel you understand me like no other ty lovely lady..peace Crim
22nd Dec 2012 6:47am
I shouldn't continue reading your works because I'm going to be tempted to put them all in my fucking reading list. lol
30th Dec 2012 4:21am
29th Dec 2012 5:46pm
Picking the black petals of my life
casting them carelessy into the sea
not giving a fuck
you have summed up my life
casting them carelessy into the sea
not giving a fuck
you have summed up my life
30th Dec 2012 4:23am
lovely lady let us cast our black petals together and watch the sea foam absorb them..then fade to darkness..peace Crim
25th Nov 2014 2:27am
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