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Gossamer Wings
Tickling the tapestry of my mind
I now seek outside myself for the
intricately woven gold of the poets that be
who spin magic from straw
giving me, an out of body experience
and a moments reprieve
from the demons that possess me
where everything that is beautiful
hangs heavy with dew and meaning
i've found myself left wanting
when trying to produce
a wealth of life giving words
just seem to lack content
swimming in darkness
I reach now to the constellations
swooping a handful of stars
bedecking your heads
as the angles you are
you keep me breathing when I want to fall
cause my mind to spin
with the gossamer wings of angels
you brush across the page
you deliver me from evil
sweet song birds
who have landed on my shoulder
into my soul and heart
refreshing my being
delivering me hope
I now seek outside myself for the
intricately woven gold of the poets that be
who spin magic from straw
giving me, an out of body experience
and a moments reprieve
from the demons that possess me
where everything that is beautiful
hangs heavy with dew and meaning
i've found myself left wanting
when trying to produce
a wealth of life giving words
just seem to lack content
swimming in darkness
I reach now to the constellations
swooping a handful of stars
bedecking your heads
as the angles you are
you keep me breathing when I want to fall
cause my mind to spin
with the gossamer wings of angels
you brush across the page
you deliver me from evil
sweet song birds
who have landed on my shoulder
into my soul and heart
refreshing my being
delivering me hope
Published 16th Dec 2012
| Edited 29th Dec 2012
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Anonymous
16th Dec 2012 00:52am
A beautiful write crim.
Thanks.
Strider :)
Thanks.
Strider :)
16th Dec 2012 1:09am
16th Dec 2012 1:03am
16th Dec 2012 1:10am
16th Dec 2012 2:03am
Crims,
yeah really good stuff as per, couple of suggests for you if you're of the mind.
Tickling the tapestry of my mind
I seek outside myself
for the intricately woven gold
of the poets that be
who spin magic from straw
giving me, an out of body experience
and a moments reprieve
from the demons that possess me
where everything that is beautiful
hangs heavy with dew and meaning
I've found myself left wanting
when trying to produce
a wealth of life giving words
just seem to lack content
sorry 'bout re writing some of your lines, I'll stop now :D . can't seem write my own right now so I can relate totally to your poem.
anyhow missus, grand job. shine on
yeah really good stuff as per, couple of suggests for you if you're of the mind.
Tickling the tapestry of my mind
I seek outside myself
for the intricately woven gold
of the poets that be
who spin magic from straw
giving me, an out of body experience
and a moments reprieve
from the demons that possess me
where everything that is beautiful
hangs heavy with dew and meaning
I've found myself left wanting
when trying to produce
a wealth of life giving words
just seem to lack content
sorry 'bout re writing some of your lines, I'll stop now :D . can't seem write my own right now so I can relate totally to your poem.
anyhow missus, grand job. shine on
29th Dec 2012 10:44pm
Ty Eamon for the tips I agree and edited as you adivised..I really appreciate the time you take took to make my poem flow better..wishing you peace Crim
16th Dec 2012 3:08am
i've found myself to be selfish
not producing the wealth of life giving words
lacking in content .. Ohhh baby girl I beg to differ. You deliver content that blows my mind heals my soul and gives me hope and makes me believe. I am star struck by you and your poetry inspires me to be better at what I do. I can't tell you enough how beautiful you are and your mind is a priceless gem that shines every time you post. I am in awe. Bows miss!
not producing the wealth of life giving words
lacking in content .. Ohhh baby girl I beg to differ. You deliver content that blows my mind heals my soul and gives me hope and makes me believe. I am star struck by you and your poetry inspires me to be better at what I do. I can't tell you enough how beautiful you are and your mind is a priceless gem that shines every time you post. I am in awe. Bows miss!
29th Dec 2012 10:46pm
beautiful Mistress you honor and humble me..I've come to love you as a writer and a person..bows to you lovely one..peace Crim
16th Dec 2012 5:18am
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18th Dec 2012 3:34pm
Thank you for priming my day with your words of hope and appreciation. Roots writing as ever with you!
29th Dec 2012 10:48pm
Anonymous
19th Dec 2012 4:05am
What a beautiful poem Ty for sharing!!
29th Dec 2012 10:51pm
Spin I think the is one of the most beautiful comments i've ever recieved..I caught your kiss from so far away and tucked in my bag of stars..so lovely a soul you are Spin..ty most graciously..wishing you peace Crim
22nd Dec 2012 6:43am
29th Dec 2012 10:52pm
29th Dec 2012 5:48pm
giving me an out of body experience
and for a moment giving me reprieve
I know the feeling
and for a moment giving me reprieve
I know the feeling
30th Dec 2012 3:50am
