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Imposing Negativity
Have a good day
Bad days are bound to come
Stay focused on good thoughts
Doubts are bound to come
Why do we have to work to stay positive?
How is it we just walk into negativity?
So frustrated by the thought
Is frustration a good thing?
Is it meant to motivate you to change things?
Better your circumstances
They're bound to get worse
Bad days are bound to come
Stay focused on good thoughts
Doubts are bound to come
Why do we have to work to stay positive?
How is it we just walk into negativity?
So frustrated by the thought
Is frustration a good thing?
Is it meant to motivate you to change things?
Better your circumstances
They're bound to get worse
Published 2nd Dec 2012
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2nd Dec 2012 7:26am
I wish I had the answers but I do know for sure that frustration is far from a good thing especially when self inflicted. motivation comes from refusing to allow current shit to keep happening. but i am merely a scribbler with random thoughts. hello there and welcome .
3rd Dec 2012 5:04am
Hey Devilish. I guess your right about motivation. Your random thoughs speak truth..
6th Dec 2012 3:26am
I like the way this starts out "have a nice day."
My favorite line is "How is it we just walk into negativity?" (having done just that recently, and regretting it.) Your poem feels just a little close to home right now. But well done.
My favorite line is "How is it we just walk into negativity?" (having done just that recently, and regretting it.) Your poem feels just a little close to home right now. But well done.
6th Dec 2012 5:16am
Im glad you liked it. Yep, the first two lines came to mind, then I freestyled from there, and the line about negativity is the core of the piece. Thanks for commenting
