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" Kisstory"
Its always the way
when friendship crumbles
no turning away
Chinese whispers
and sinister mumbles
but don't look away
this reality uncertain
don't turn away
stand away from the curtains
I kissed you
i kissed you
i am kissing you
could this be true?
caged feelings released
and realized
bottled emotions set free
with one single kiss
when i kissed you.
Get ready for friction
reality became non-fiction
i blame the alcohol myself
kissing you is good for my health
but its always the way
when friend become lovers
they stop being friends,
bypass being your lover
they slowly become your mother.
I kissed you
i was kissing you.
You and me
this is kisstory
there is nothing left to say
except if we were just friends
why did it feel so right?
(Written For A Comp, cant remember which one)
when friendship crumbles
no turning away
Chinese whispers
and sinister mumbles
but don't look away
this reality uncertain
don't turn away
stand away from the curtains
I kissed you
i kissed you
i am kissing you
could this be true?
caged feelings released
and realized
bottled emotions set free
with one single kiss
when i kissed you.
Get ready for friction
reality became non-fiction
i blame the alcohol myself
kissing you is good for my health
but its always the way
when friend become lovers
they stop being friends,
bypass being your lover
they slowly become your mother.
I kissed you
i was kissing you.
You and me
this is kisstory
there is nothing left to say
except if we were just friends
why did it feel so right?
(Written For A Comp, cant remember which one)
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Re: " Kisstory"
Anonymous
29th Nov 2012 9:33am
This is a great write! The title is very original and this piece is another one to be preformed read out loud.(although would shout it loud though....lol)
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29th Nov 2012 10:03am
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Anonymous
29th Nov 2012 10:21am
Sorry, typo, meant WOULDNT...typed too fast...
However, it would of course cause reactions if youd shout it out....lol
However, it would of course cause reactions if youd shout it out....lol
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29th Nov 2012 10:41am
Lol somtimes in that atmosphere you have to shout it out.
many thanks
marcus
many thanks
marcus
Re: " Kisstory"
Anonymous
29th Nov 2012 9:55am
Lovely marcus...just lovely
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29th Nov 2012 3:51pm
Cheers my dear, indeed a kiss is a kiss depends who you are kissing lol
cheers
marcus
cheers
marcus
Re: " Kisstory"
29th Nov 2012 1:59pm
Alright Z pucker up.... but maybe the wife won't appreciate it lolol I will blow one to you from here @@@@@ lolo nice piece Z.
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re: Re: " Kisstory"
29th Nov 2012 3:08pm
Lol blowing you one back red, the wife is cool about such matter
cheers
marcus x
cheers
marcus x
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Re: " Kisstory"
30th Nov 2012 3:20am
great write, good lucky in the comp, it may only be me but women get prettier with alcohol or a little moonshine, lol cheers Bro
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re: Re: " Kisstory"
30th Nov 2012 8:13am
lol to true bro i suspect its the same for the lady's, beer goggles in all shapes and sizes for both sexes.
cheers for reading
marcus
cheers for reading
marcus
Re: " Kisstory"
30th Nov 2012 7:59am
;) I had to smile reading this one. I was especially fond of your lover to mother stanza. Jolly clever, this one.
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re: Re: " Kisstory"
30th Nov 2012 8:15am
thanks very much emily, i like that line to it was very random, i love it when it slots in to the poem like that.
Cheers for reading
marcus
Cheers for reading
marcus
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re: Re: " Kisstory"
30th Nov 2012 9:33pm
Cheers my freind, all the things that make up a single kiss.
many thanks for reading
cheers
marcus
many thanks for reading
cheers
marcus
Re: " Kisstory"
30th Nov 2012 5:19pm
Ha!Ha! I just love it! I've missed your humor and wonderful writes. I'm on the mend after a severe injury and hope to catch up on your poems very soon. Best of luck in the competition!
cheers-Faith
cheers-Faith
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re: Re: " Kisstory"
30th Nov 2012 9:35pm
Hi faith, hope you are feeling better, i was wondering where you went.
many thanks for reading and get well soon
cheers
marcus x
many thanks for reading and get well soon
cheers
marcus x