love lost

Very nice rythm you have going on in this poem nicely penned Miss Noel
DD

thank you miss desire :)

The passing of the tenses...falling

ummm okay

He walks, he walked..the details of a poem on every level are the essential notes...changing the tense from present to past shows the passing of the relationship as it was, and everything in between was the explanation of how that happened....but here is the essential part.  I'm reading...deeply.

im guessing u liked it and yea its a true story about an old friend

"love  he wanted but never could have
search...
searching for what he had lost
secrets..."  this  was  my favorite  line,i  guess  dup  better  prepare  for another   hot  bomb   and  that's  you  baby

aww thanks love!!

I really liked the verses. I would like to add to it.
 Flow, flowing like waters
 Dreams, breaking as shattered glasses
 He dreamed for love, only some love
 Even that got lost, when he lost the person he loved the most
  He kept on walking in search of hope
  Hope, he had lost since the one he loved was no more.