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drip drip drip
It calls to me
Night and day
Use me and use me
Your pain will go away
Drip drip drip
I’ll brighten up your day
I’ll leave you a scar…..
Drip drip drip
It never seems to end
Red fades to blackness
Roses turn to death
All there is left
Is drip drip drip
Night and day
Use me and use me
Your pain will go away
Drip drip drip
I’ll brighten up your day
I’ll leave you a scar…..
Drip drip drip
It never seems to end
Red fades to blackness
Roses turn to death
All there is left
Is drip drip drip
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Re: drip drip drip
21st Nov 2012 3:42am
i love it
"I'll leave you a scar...
Drip drip drip
It never seems to end"
i feel it
crmison regret
"I'll leave you a scar...
Drip drip drip
It never seems to end"
i feel it
crmison regret
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re: Re: drip drip drip
21st Nov 2012 3:45am
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Anonymous
21st Nov 2012 3:50am
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re: Re: drip drip drip
21st Nov 2012 3:52am
Re: drip drip drip
21st Nov 2012 4:12am
This is fantastically creepy. One thing,
"Roses fade to death"
Doesn't really go along with the other lines as well. But it's still good.
Welcome to DUP. Remember, we're all awesome here. Minus the few assholes.
Cheers! ;)
"Roses fade to death"
Doesn't really go along with the other lines as well. But it's still good.
Welcome to DUP. Remember, we're all awesome here. Minus the few assholes.
Cheers! ;)
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re: Re: drip drip drip
21st Nov 2012 4:14am
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21st Nov 2012 4:19am
I wasn't being mean or anything. I was just trying to critique. Anyway, no probbb.
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Anonymous
21st Nov 2012 5:27am
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Re: drip drip drip
26th Nov 2012 11:25pm
~**♥**~ Each scar has it's own little story to tell. Hopefully one day it won't go too far. ~**♥**~
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28th Nov 2012 4:15am
~***~ I understand not being able to stop, for I've been cutting since a child. I didn't even understand about all this the 1st. time I cutted. But from time to time the feeling would go dorment & without even expecting it I'm getting stiches again. Wishing the best. ~***~
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Re: drip drip drip
2nd Dec 2012 3:00pm
I know what you mean once you start its hard to stop. When I first started I was young but it was the only way I could make that feeling of suffering and pain and hurt finally just go away. Although I have had my fair share Of stitches, but no matter how many times you do it that pain always comes back.
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