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30 seconds to mars
a grade A celeb
empowers
espouses
eschews
rambles his lines
as the jimmy jib
pans
collective morality
hangs like smog
midair in
bedrooms
eyes stare
menwomenchild
living/dying
all kinds
a few million they say
some survey
now
change of angle
studio audience
claps whistles
they take a com-break
leaving the million minds to
accept and process
everything
as
another grade A celeb
brandishes her hair
flash-shimmering
matte-butterpaper
tugs at it
swings
it comes
to life
swerves
hitting
two-six-pack-abs
cropped-hair-fit-men
in their faces
they flip and crash
a bad-hair day
may be
ah there it goes
shitstorm
.
Published 20th Nov 2012
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Anonymous
20th Nov 2012 8:03pm
Can you give me 30 Seconds more to unscramble my brain? Damn, Sumeet! Your poetry always throws me for a spin. Love it:)
21st Nov 2012 6:41am
devlin
ha.:] that made me smile.
thank you for stopping by and leaving
your thoughts. keep the love.
power,
sumeet
ha.:] that made me smile.
thank you for stopping by and leaving
your thoughts. keep the love.
power,
sumeet
Ahhh "masterful"
would be apt here.
I believe you have
in a unique
way, provided
perfect commentry
for the observations.
The mix references
between "the book" and
"the band" is perfectly
entwined in the mixed
observations
possibly between
the cyber and real life
memorable for me is...
"it comes
to life
swerves
hitting
two-six-pack-abs
cropped-hair-fit-men
in their faces"
and I will love
"collective morality
hangs like smog"
forever.
Take a bow sir.
Well done.
Al.
would be apt here.
I believe you have
in a unique
way, provided
perfect commentry
for the observations.
The mix references
between "the book" and
"the band" is perfectly
entwined in the mixed
observations
possibly between
the cyber and real life
memorable for me is...
"it comes
to life
swerves
hitting
two-six-pack-abs
cropped-hair-fit-men
in their faces"
and I will love
"collective morality
hangs like smog"
forever.
Take a bow sir.
Well done.
Al.
21st Nov 2012 8:18am
al
ah good brother.:] yes, you
have said it well. swell.
thank you as ever.
blue skies x
sumeet
ah good brother.:] yes, you
have said it well. swell.
thank you as ever.
blue skies x
sumeet
