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When head lay against the pillow
yet I remained comfortless,
with burning eyes brimming with tears
Oh, how they braved slumber!
beholding the dark night folding over,
turning and breaking into  
the first virginal rays of dawn
Yet, it was just another day for me
when the sun refused to shine
and my world revolved no more,
as it was
devoid of you,
and in your loss, I lost my life!
Written by sparshita (Joetina Arc)
Published | Edited 18th Dec 2012
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