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Inexplicable
How should I explain you,
The sorrow and the helplessness,
Of loving you,
And not being able to,
Do anything about that,
The weirdness of that which is called love,
It has no destination in our case,
It had no start, it has no end,
It just happens, and it did happen,
To you and me,
It just can be cherished, buried deep,
In our heart and soul,
And nothing else can be done,
I hope you know that,
I hope you understand.
The sorrow and the helplessness,
Of loving you,
And not being able to,
Do anything about that,
The weirdness of that which is called love,
It has no destination in our case,
It had no start, it has no end,
It just happens, and it did happen,
To you and me,
It just can be cherished, buried deep,
In our heart and soul,
And nothing else can be done,
I hope you know that,
I hope you understand.
Published 15th Dec 2011
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15th Dec 2011 7:39pm
Stalemate it was sad to have a love that was never put into motion. As motionless as pond water. In which it just needed a peeble to be thrown in it. I've been there, done that, got a t shirt. I pay for it everyday. Great write with realistic ending
16th Dec 2011 4:21pm
15th Dec 2011 7:56pm
16th Dec 2011 4:22pm
17th Dec 2011 5:07pm
pure, simple, concise, and to the point. Poets kill themselves to express emotions this way, and you do it it in a very natural prose. It sounded like you weren´t even trying(a good thing)
17th Dec 2011 7:07pm
25th Dec 2011 2:14pm
Nice.
I liked this, it was easy to read and follow.
not sure about having coma's at the end of every line.
I think if you cut the "Do anything about that" it would not do any harm.
that said, certainly a good poem.
fair play. shine on!
I liked this, it was easy to read and follow.
not sure about having coma's at the end of every line.
I think if you cut the "Do anything about that" it would not do any harm.
that said, certainly a good poem.
fair play. shine on!
25th Dec 2011 5:48pm
