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What Thoughts I Had By William Marsland.
Miss Swisham had fantastic tits.
They’d be thrown around the classroom
Like the twin hulls
of a catamaran.
Her milky whiteness
splashed my view
and straddled my immature loins
on many an occasion.
it's in sexually explicit because i don't know if tits is non sexually explicit lol
They’d be thrown around the classroom
Like the twin hulls
of a catamaran.
Her milky whiteness
splashed my view
and straddled my immature loins
on many an occasion.
it's in sexually explicit because i don't know if tits is non sexually explicit lol
Published 23rd May 2010
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23rd May 2010 5:48am
..I would have liked to have seen her beating to windward, Billy boy - shame this wasn't longer - so we could have witnessed the finer points of sailing!
9th Aug 2011 1:38am
i'll think about it when i take it back out of the draw, thanks for the feedback
Anonymous
1st Jun 2010 1:00am
I'm sure it isn't explicit, Billy! Great poem, wonderfully creative for what is essentially a re-creation of a sexual urge.
9th Aug 2011 1:39am
8th Aug 2011 9:12pm
"Like the twin hulls
of a catamaran."
or more for that metaphor!
wonderfully original!
of a catamaran."
or more for that metaphor!
wonderfully original!
9th Aug 2011 1:40am
