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Why?
Oh, damsel in distress
In a constant state of unrest
Why do you long for things that can’t possible exist?
Oh, lonely girl
No need to unfurl
Why do you constantly feel like you’re never enough?
Oh, sad sad lady
Always constantly debating
Why is this world so cruel, so cruel to you?
Published 16th Oct 2012
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28th Sep 2013 3:59pm
Good poem!
from one damsel to another:)
I like your use of repetition it is just enough to drive your words home
from one damsel to another:)
I like your use of repetition it is just enough to drive your words home
