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scarred
I cut my face so I look like I'm smiling.
I may look fine to you,
But really, inside I'm dying.
I may not look like i care,
But really care more than ever.
I regret every scar i have for the ties that i've severed.
Just look me in the eye and tell me you'll stay.
If you don't I'll lose my mind and start to fade away.[/font]
I may look fine to you,
But really, inside I'm dying.
I may not look like i care,
But really care more than ever.
I regret every scar i have for the ties that i've severed.
Just look me in the eye and tell me you'll stay.
If you don't I'll lose my mind and start to fade away.[/font]
Published 19th May 2010
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22nd May 2010 3:22am
a message given short and sweetly. actually it is the anguish and despair in the words which make it sweet, desperation to have some one stay and the guilt of a dark past are embedded nicely in this poem.
keep on writing :)
keep on writing :)
22nd May 2010 10:36pm
27th May 2010 3:30am
the last two lines were great.. and I like the talk about cutting and regret.. also admitting that you really do care.. most people are like "I dont give a shit what anyone thinks" I dont think thats ever really true.. we are all weak.. weve all been fucked with.. there are no warriors.. the predators just have callouses on their heart and attack the meek so they wont get attacked.. the meek dont know how to grow callouses on their heart
18th Jun 2010 00:16am
dang almost every emotional poem u write i can relate 2. good work.=)
18th Jun 2010 4:21pm
thank you! i like to try to come up with stuff thats deep. its very rewarding when others can relate. it makes it that much better
1st Jul 2010 3:48pm
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