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Inch by inch..
Inch by inch, I crawl toward my fate,
and in a pinch I meet it,
All you do is push me further,
Into the hell you've created.
Please, let go, let go of my collar,
You always drag me like a dog,
I live my life the way YOU want it,
I have no control over myself.
Are you with me, for my very last dollar,
That I need to clothe and feed me,
Will you please stop pulling me into the pit,
When will you just leave me.
Inch by inch, I crawl toward my fate,
and in a pinch I meet it,
Sit, sit, learn from my lesson,
Hate, hate is what I believe in.
and in a pinch I meet it,
All you do is push me further,
Into the hell you've created.
Please, let go, let go of my collar,
You always drag me like a dog,
I live my life the way YOU want it,
I have no control over myself.
Are you with me, for my very last dollar,
That I need to clothe and feed me,
Will you please stop pulling me into the pit,
When will you just leave me.
Inch by inch, I crawl toward my fate,
and in a pinch I meet it,
Sit, sit, learn from my lesson,
Hate, hate is what I believe in.
Published 10th Oct 2012
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11th Oct 2012 3:10am
good vertical symetry i like how when lines roll sometimes not even always rhyming but the syllables add up right. if u say it right everything rhymes. idk i liked it. look forward to more...........
11th Oct 2012 2:09pm
