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Madder Than A Box Of Frogs
This room is small
These walls are thin
Curtains closed
Wallpapered in sin
Nothing gets out
nothing gets in
Strange things crawl across her floor
She can’t use them anymore
She’s sits on her knees
fingers in ears
She will never leave this room
For this outside world
Breeds hostility and fear
They say her mind is a lost
Random noises
And broken cogs
You could argue she is
Mad as a box of frogs
She tries to escape
Her screams cry out
She is lost in a box
Of sorrow and discontent.
These walls are thin
Curtains closed
Wallpapered in sin
Nothing gets out
nothing gets in
Strange things crawl across her floor
She can’t use them anymore
She’s sits on her knees
fingers in ears
She will never leave this room
For this outside world
Breeds hostility and fear
They say her mind is a lost
Random noises
And broken cogs
You could argue she is
Mad as a box of frogs
She tries to escape
Her screams cry out
She is lost in a box
Of sorrow and discontent.
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Re: Madder Than A Box Of Frogs
10th Oct 2012 1:58am
re: Re: Madder Than A Box Of Frogs
10th Oct 2012 8:19am
Re: Madder Than A Box Of Frogs
10th Oct 2012 4:05am
beautifull write!!! love everything about it!!!
These walls are thin
Curtains closed
Wallpapered in sin
Nothing gets out
nothing gets in
Thats what im talkin about!!
These walls are thin
Curtains closed
Wallpapered in sin
Nothing gets out
nothing gets in
Thats what im talkin about!!
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re: Re: Madder Than A Box Of Frogs
10th Oct 2012 8:20am
Re: Madder Than A Box Of Frogs
10th Oct 2012 5:26pm
Re: Madder Than A Box Of Frogs
10th Oct 2012 7:00pm
Thanks nikki this poem is loosley based on one of my nextdoor neihbores, bless her.
Many thanks for reading
marcus
Many thanks for reading
marcus
Re: Madder Than A Box Of Frogs
28th Oct 2012 2:42pm
love the cl0sing lines. . .
' . . . Lost in a box of sorrow an disc0ntent'
' . . . Lost in a box of sorrow an disc0ntent'
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re: Re: Madder Than A Box Of Frogs
28th Oct 2012 2:45pm
Cheers it losely based on my next door neighbor who is lets face it madder then a box of frogs lol.
cheers for reading
marcus
cheers for reading
marcus
Re: Madder Than A Box Of Frogs
28th Oct 2012 3:46pm
re: Re: Madder Than A Box Of Frogs
28th Oct 2012 4:05pm
ah cool i love tim burton films, i need to watch nightmare before christmas again soon.
marcus
marcus
Re: Madder Than A Box Of Frogs
28th Oct 2012 4:20pm
im actualy l0oking for a copy of that title and charlie and the ch0c0late fact0ry. . though i prefer the original charlie and the ch0c0late factory. . .
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Re: Madder Than A Box Of Frogs
28th Oct 2012 4:24pm
Cool i love the original charlie and the choclate factory version better the tim burton version, it is on every week over here, i havent seen the original one in years.
marcus
marcus
Re: Madder Than A Box Of Frogs
28th Oct 2012 7:27pm
were im fr0m the original and many other classics air every christmas seas0n. . .
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