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Let my words shake you
grabbing your insides
twisting everything
that you thought
made you who you are
Allow me to navigate
Tonight i will paint
portraits of the things
hanging for everyone to see
Pictures living in paragraphs
now let my words carve
small painless grooves
thin lines in your sculpture
connected to my imagination...
grabbing your insides
twisting everything
that you thought
made you who you are
Allow me to navigate
Tonight i will paint
portraits of the things
hanging for everyone to see
Pictures living in paragraphs
now let my words carve
small painless grooves
thin lines in your sculpture
connected to my imagination...
Published 6th Oct 2012
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6th Oct 2012 7:30pm
6th Oct 2012 9:30pm
6th Oct 2012 10:39pm
Very beautiful, you have wonderful imagery. Thank you for recomending your art. Let me know when you write some more, I'd like to check it out.
7th Oct 2012 3:53pm
Dearest Zorro1, You are indeed a very talented poet ... Welcome to DUP ... Hope to enjoy more of your talent in the near future ... Love and Peace ... Bruce
8th Oct 2012 8:18pm
this is an amazing write. This is an excellent demonstration of artistry through words. Bravo!
9th Oct 2012 00:03am
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11th Oct 2012 6:49pm
I have to say that this is a really great poem, however, the line 'Portraits of things' is kind of vague. The rest is really good though. :)
11th Oct 2012 7:00pm
wow.. this is pretty on point with the title. i'm impressed. hello there you . thank you for reading me and welcome to DU. i am also sorta new compared to the vets here. but none the less welcome.
12th Oct 2012 00:40am
Anonymous
12th Oct 2012 4:40pm
zorro1,
I think LILMISSTORRES nailed it: 'awsomely groovy!' Enjoyed ; )
tornado
I think LILMISSTORRES nailed it: 'awsomely groovy!' Enjoyed ; )
tornado
