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Re: Eric
1st Oct 2012 7:56pm
G:string
well done, short to the point and from the heart, can't go wrong, right?
I find anyway, that an expression from deep within oneself tends to sit more comfortable on the page.
fair play to you. y'know these last few months have seen you really grow and put your heart and soul into your writing.
much respect, shine the fuck on
well done, short to the point and from the heart, can't go wrong, right?
I find anyway, that an expression from deep within oneself tends to sit more comfortable on the page.
fair play to you. y'know these last few months have seen you really grow and put your heart and soul into your writing.
much respect, shine the fuck on
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re: Re: Eric
1st Oct 2012 7:58pm
Yeah I've been showing the real me, not the clown! Thank you means a lot coming from you xoxox <3
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Anonymous
4th Oct 2012 1:50am
What a beautiful man the Irishman can be.
Pretty work here GG....you're doing 'em write when they touch people.
dp
Pretty work here GG....you're doing 'em write when they touch people.
dp
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re: re: re: Re: Eric
4th Oct 2012 1:59am
My lil lep yep he's the best. Lol Irish idk I think he's a mix of some other stuff. Xoxo Ty
Re: Eric
1st Oct 2012 8:15pm
Re: Eric
1st Oct 2012 11:17pm
Very simple and raw. To the point. I know that feeling. Good job Gigi.
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Re: Eric
1st Oct 2012 11:25pm
That pretty much sums up
h'ow
thatshit goes
witout
belaboring it's (already belabored) p o i n t .
h'ow
thatshit goes
witout
belaboring it's (already belabored) p o i n t .
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Re: Eric
2nd Oct 2012 6:39am
Re: Eric
4th Oct 2012 1:32am
Re: Eric
4th Oct 2012 3:08am
Re: Eric
Anonymous
4th Oct 2012 4:14pm
Raw emotion captured flawlessly
in concise form
Excellent
Peace
Kitty
in concise form
Excellent
Peace
Kitty
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Re: Eric
4th Oct 2012 11:19pm
This could be a service wife facing time without her spouse, alone with their kids in the married quarter while he is on campaign or major tour of duty. Hats off to them.
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re: Re: Eric
4th Oct 2012 11:20pm