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Slant
like
a
gentle
slope
the
knife
angles
life
endangered
down
into
the
back
of
the
neck
the
assassin
way
slanting
down
angling
down
severing
life
deadly
is
the
knife
heavy
is
the
strife
and
when
you
fall
over
dead
you
see
the
world
slant
before
it
all
fades
to
black
a
gentle
slope
the
knife
angles
life
endangered
down
into
the
back
of
the
neck
the
assassin
way
slanting
down
angling
down
severing
life
deadly
is
the
knife
heavy
is
the
strife
and
when
you
fall
over
dead
you
see
the
world
slant
before
it
all
fades
to
black
Published 23rd Sep 2012
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24th Sep 2012 5:10pm
Wow. Greats verses.
I love the way you lay it out.
Direct and powerfull
Steamroller.
I love the way you lay it out.
Direct and powerfull
Steamroller.
25th Sep 2012 2:23am
thanks, luca! I wanted to do something a little different instead of the boring old layouts everyone else uses including me. Glad you enjoyed it.
9th Dec 2012 10:59pm
12th Dec 2012 00:33am
thank you. The old formats get a bit boring and one must mix it up a bit :)
