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Just One Night
If all I ever have is just one night
then let it be everything
I have ever dreamed,
all that I could ever want,
everything I ever desired,
all of it, this one time.
Tonight, feed every hunger
that has gone unfed,
be every fantasy I have ever had,
every dream that woke
me writhing in bed,
fulfill every yearning experienced.
Touch me in all the places
that have gone ignored,
finger the delicate folds
that my body forms,
stroke every curve and concave,
caress my skin in every sensual way.
I want to be handled
firmly as only a man can,
the hunger creates
an atmosphere of possession,
an air of fire and desire
that your feelings’ express.
I will meet you in this life,
the next life or any other,
so long as you and I unite
and become one in the light.
Our mating will create
a cosmic sonic boom,
absorbing the power of midnight
or the bright sun of high noon,
even if all we ever have,
is just this one, magnificent, night.
Everyone needs someone to love,
to share with, to talk to;
give it to me baby, all of your love,
all your desires, your dreams I will share,
your heart needs a heart, here is mine.
Just for one night, ohhh… just for one night,
will you be all mine? A union so divine
that in the stars it will be archived,
the loving we had on this one night.
then let it be everything
I have ever dreamed,
all that I could ever want,
everything I ever desired,
all of it, this one time.
Tonight, feed every hunger
that has gone unfed,
be every fantasy I have ever had,
every dream that woke
me writhing in bed,
fulfill every yearning experienced.
Touch me in all the places
that have gone ignored,
finger the delicate folds
that my body forms,
stroke every curve and concave,
caress my skin in every sensual way.
I want to be handled
firmly as only a man can,
the hunger creates
an atmosphere of possession,
an air of fire and desire
that your feelings’ express.
I will meet you in this life,
the next life or any other,
so long as you and I unite
and become one in the light.
Our mating will create
a cosmic sonic boom,
absorbing the power of midnight
or the bright sun of high noon,
even if all we ever have,
is just this one, magnificent, night.
Everyone needs someone to love,
to share with, to talk to;
give it to me baby, all of your love,
all your desires, your dreams I will share,
your heart needs a heart, here is mine.
Just for one night, ohhh… just for one night,
will you be all mine? A union so divine
that in the stars it will be archived,
the loving we had on this one night.
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Re: Just One Night
19th Sep 2012 4:36pm
I write this hoping nothing I say will prompt your wrath. The sax player Richard Elliot has a tune called "If I kissed You", with vocals by Jonathan Butler. To me it is the best Valentine's Day song ever composed. This poem reminds me of it.
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You Jazz have nothing to fear, Thank you for stopping by to read my piece glad you enjoyed it, I was listening to some NEO-SOUL while I was writing it.
Red
Red
re: re: Re: Just One Night
19th Sep 2012 10:42pm
Thanks for expanding my terminology. Had to look up "NEO-SOUL". The musicians given as examples were John Legend and Maxwell, both of which have a connection to the best concert I have ever been to, Sade, so it is all good.
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19th Sep 2012 11:14pm
Jazz; check out *Kem, *Ne-yo,*Jill Scott and *Dwele, they too have some great music
Re: Just One Night
19th Sep 2012 4:37pm
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19th Sep 2012 4:51pm
Hahahah run fluffy run! Thanks turtle man, I think its a good thing. lolol
Red
Red
Re: Just One Night
Anonymous
19th Sep 2012 4:38pm
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Hahaha Gabriel you took me waaay back some ol school crooning hahah love it! My red hair is showing lol Thanks for the great comment! I am thrilled that you liked it.
Red
Red
Re: Just One Night
Anonymous
19th Sep 2012 4:42pm
Nicely done, Red.
Strider
Strider
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19th Sep 2012 5:00pm
Re: Just One Night
19th Sep 2012 4:42pm
I see this being an 84 hour night with your ooh to the lalala man. Likely illegal in some countries.
Play some hopscotch and duck duck goose too? :)
Lovely layout as always.
Play some hopscotch and duck duck goose too? :)
Lovely layout as always.
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re: Re: Just One Night
19th Sep 2012 5:03pm
HAHAHAHAHA ROFLMAO HAHAHA that would really be funny, going to jail for playing duck duck goose hahaha better yet twister and get in a tangle! hahaha
silly nature boy thanks for the fun comment. ;p
Red
silly nature boy thanks for the fun comment. ;p
Red
re: re: Re: Just One Night
19th Sep 2012 5:08pm
thanks for separating the type from the illustration. I liked the melding but it was hardddd to read :)
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I am going to buy you some special glasses for your baby blues haha mister magoo ;P
Re: Just One Night
19th Sep 2012 7:08pm
re: Re: Just One Night
19th Sep 2012 8:27pm
Thank you, thank you my dear very kind of you. So glad you enjoyed this piece.
Red
Red
Re: Just One Night
19th Sep 2012 7:19pm
Hey Red...
Beautifully done...
So well reminds me of my feelings a long, long time ago...
Beautifully done...
Beautifully done...
So well reminds me of my feelings a long, long time ago...
Beautifully done...
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re: Re: Just One Night
19th Sep 2012 8:29pm
Well if it is good memory then I am happy for you, also that you could enjoy my piece. Thank you for the comment.
Red
Red
Re: Just One Night
21st Sep 2012 10:22am
re: Re: Just One Night
21st Sep 2012 2:33pm
Thank you Grace, you would think but it doesn't happen sometimes.Thanks for stopping by to comment.
Red
Red
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22nd Sep 2012 10:03am
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22nd Sep 2012 11:33am
Re: Just One Night
23rd Sep 2012 10:20pm
"I want to be handled
firmly as only a man can,
the hunger creates
an atmosphere of possession,
an air of fire and desire
that your feelings’ express."
Oh yeah, I really like this ... way to go girl!
firmly as only a man can,
the hunger creates
an atmosphere of possession,
an air of fire and desire
that your feelings’ express."
Oh yeah, I really like this ... way to go girl!
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23rd Sep 2012 11:20pm