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Myself
My self
A golden light
Not too dim
Not too bright
The perfect clouds
Blocking heat
Above the crouds
Late at night
A leading star
Shining bright
A helping friend
Always there
Till the end
Loving caring
Holding sharing
Play full daring
Power full free
Smothering love
And this is me
A golden light
Not too dim
Not too bright
The perfect clouds
Blocking heat
Above the crouds
Late at night
A leading star
Shining bright
A helping friend
Always there
Till the end
Loving caring
Holding sharing
Play full daring
Power full free
Smothering love
And this is me
Published 15th Sep 2012
| Edited 23rd Nov 2012
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25th Mar 2013 7:59pm
I like the way the stanzas are set up; it creates a great pattern. I'm wondering if "crouds" is meant to be "clouds"...or maybe "crowds."
