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Surface
Under the surface
It’s always under the surface
When life asks too much
When it hurts more to feel
Than to touch my torments
I release all in the ocean
Under the surface
It’s always under the surface
I can scream
I can swim
I move slower
I feel nothing
Even the pain can disappear
The need to rise can be suppressed
For as long as I need
I have a towel waiting above
I can wrap myself in troubles once more
But what if
What if I waited
Waited and waited
Under the surface
Always under the surface
It’s always under the surface
When life asks too much
When it hurts more to feel
Than to touch my torments
I release all in the ocean
Under the surface
It’s always under the surface
I can scream
I can swim
I move slower
I feel nothing
Even the pain can disappear
The need to rise can be suppressed
For as long as I need
I have a towel waiting above
I can wrap myself in troubles once more
But what if
What if I waited
Waited and waited
Under the surface
Always under the surface
Published 7th Sep 2012
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Anonymous
14th Nov 2012 12:33pm
Very nicely written, yes, its always under the surface although beneath can be a bottomless ocean
29th Dec 2012 4:27am
Without an end to depth. Where else would such a sea stand except the human soul? Thanks for reading
29th Jan 2013 9:10pm
Found your poem comforting in a most personal sense; always as one with the sea. Truly enjoyed this. :-)
5th Feb 2013 1:15am
