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I'mproviserKilledForMakingThingsUp
I'mproviserKilledForMakingThingsUp
fotoAlsoby:DaKozaMoSep3,2012at10:22am
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a'gain, no
turn
unstoned i n
misery'mercy's
s a k e,
put out-there (where)
no
body sees hear
'cept
maybe that
synthetic laugh'track
i'think i'heard once
ago up on a time.....
nevernever need no
mercymercy, dearly dead
Other,another stone
bemortal'd in thee wall of
things made up made down
mad
down
be
low
mercy's misery &thensome
eye'll ne'er see yr dear lovebody again-
sh'sh'shots riiiiiiiiing out -----
ejaculant metals riddle riddle rid
dle (e Xp lode)
flesh y bone , brain y mind.........
(some one said "it isnt funny anymore",
tho I'beg to differ....
& i'll beg s o m e more)
........>>>dkzk3sept2012/////
fotoAlsoby:DaKozaMoSep3,2012at10:22am
·
a'gain, no
turn
unstoned i n
misery'mercy's
s a k e,
put out-there (where)
no
body sees hear
'cept
maybe that
synthetic laugh'track
i'think i'heard once
ago up on a time.....
nevernever need no
mercymercy, dearly dead
Other,another stone
bemortal'd in thee wall of
things made up made down
mad
down
be
low
mercy's misery &thensome
eye'll ne'er see yr dear lovebody again-
sh'sh'shots riiiiiiiiing out -----
ejaculant metals riddle riddle rid
dle (e Xp lode)
flesh y bone , brain y mind.........
(some one said "it isnt funny anymore",
tho I'beg to differ....
& i'll beg s o m e more)
........>>>dkzk3sept2012/////
Published 3rd Sep 2012
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Anonymous
4th Sep 2012 00:57am
Ola, Sir DanielX. . .out of the poems I've read from you thus far, I like this one the best. There's just something about killers in general, whether contracted or gang-related, that I find poetic because the majority of them find justice in their deed and are able to justify it whereas the rest of 'em spend the rest of their lives living in regret. Excellent write;)
most deep dear mil grazie[s], cara......
yr be'devlin pre'versity is quite beguiling from this safe cyberdistance....
can't'elp buttwonder what y'd 'be like' in Actual
d'Factual Proximity....a most unlikely occurrence.
i wrote one specifically 'inspired' by my-illusion-of-you a week or so ago.
At the moment eye don'remember what i called it./ okay, i just checked it. Yr name is in the title....now eye gotta go back & see wtf i wrote,,,,,,,
big i'maginary love,
dkzk
yr be'devlin pre'versity is quite beguiling from this safe cyberdistance....
can't'elp buttwonder what y'd 'be like' in Actual
d'Factual Proximity....a most unlikely occurrence.
i wrote one specifically 'inspired' by my-illusion-of-you a week or so ago.
At the moment eye don'remember what i called it./ okay, i just checked it. Yr name is in the title....now eye gotta go back & see wtf i wrote,,,,,,,
big i'maginary love,
dkzk
6th Sep 2012 6:55pm
6th Sep 2012 10:44pm
thanx LemRay
uhh, sorry for knockin the wind outta ye, butt eye'm honored, sir
uhh, sorry for knockin the wind outta ye, butt eye'm honored, sir
8th Sep 2012 1:32am
