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i'm glad you're here (with me
i'm glad you're here (with me
and i with you) warm and
waiting wondering
what might happen next
is what was meant to be
between two lovers anyway
what of the words spoken
in haste never matters now
with gentle fingers probing
moving slowly downward
to regions in between
to touch honey to drown
with lips tender to warm
the breath of all breaths
and words love comes in
gasps and whispers i'm glad
you're here with me
and i with you
holding you beholding you
in love's sweet aftermath
and i with you) warm and
waiting wondering
what might happen next
is what was meant to be
between two lovers anyway
what of the words spoken
in haste never matters now
with gentle fingers probing
moving slowly downward
to regions in between
to touch honey to drown
with lips tender to warm
the breath of all breaths
and words love comes in
gasps and whispers i'm glad
you're here with me
and i with you
holding you beholding you
in love's sweet aftermath
Published 31st Aug 2012
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31st Aug 2012 11:35am
31st Aug 2012 4:45pm
thank you so much Soul Man Ken...i appreciate your comments so much....Faith
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31st Aug 2012 1:45pm
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31st Aug 2012 4:47pm
`i'm thrilled you enjoyed my poem so much...thank you so much for your wonderful remarks...you made my heart smile....Faith
31st Aug 2012 4:11pm
31st Aug 2012 4:43pm
thank you so much for your kind words....you made my day and it's just begun...Faith
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6th Jan 2014 7:13pm
I have read u before
on some other sites
and love the sophistication
which resides
still with in
nice dignified
poetry lady
on some other sites
and love the sophistication
which resides
still with in
nice dignified
poetry lady
9th Jan 2014 5:35pm
Many thanks, again. I appreciate your wonderful remarks more than you know.
Love-Faith
Love-Faith
9th Jan 2014 5:53pm
1st May 2014 6:17pm
with gentle fingers probing
moving slowly downward
to regions in between
to touch honey to drown
u are worthy of more than a single read
moving slowly downward
to regions in between
to touch honey to drown
u are worthy of more than a single read
9th Aug 2017 8:40pm
long long long ago
i think i read so much of urs poetry
in yahoo calls
and someone always objected owing to jealousy
but yahoo always kicked me
i now know where why and when
you read me also
many a varied pseudo names
I too myself have forgotten
do you remember
faith me in marie
i think i read so much of urs poetry
in yahoo calls
and someone always objected owing to jealousy
but yahoo always kicked me
i now know where why and when
you read me also
many a varied pseudo names
I too myself have forgotten
do you remember
faith me in marie
9th Aug 2017 9:00pm
Of course I remember. It was a long time ago.
It's great hearing from you. Did you know this poem is my most read poem on this site?
It's great hearing from you. Did you know this poem is my most read poem on this site?
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10th Dec 2020 10:51pm
Really lovely sensual tenderness in this one. I love it and I am glad you are here with me. ;) (and yes, I skip around a lot, lol)
11th Dec 2020 9:40pm
Hi, Kristina! What a nice surprise to see you read and commented on one of my much earlier works. I am glad you liked it! I am also glad that you're here and love getting your comments on my poetry. I love reading your poetry as well. Thanks for gracing my page with your wonderful presence! It's always great to know you have stopped by!
30th Mar 2024 00:24am
your passionate and intimate poem beautifully expresses the joy and contentment of being in the presence of a loved one. your imagery of gentle fingers, tender lips, and the exploration of intimate moments evokes a sense of intimacy and desire. you celebrates the profound connection between the lovers and the blissful aftermath of their love. It exudes a sense of fulfillment and cherishing the presence of a beloved partner. Grat writing.
1st Apr 2024 6:02pm
