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Rodeo Rider
Her arrival was noted
written down
dressed to thrill
out on the town
Short skirt
Six inch heal
A beckoning smile
Virginity to steal
Heads would turn
and look her way
Some would follow
"What's the price" ill pay"!
A pause in her step
Smiling with delight
"For you anything baby"
"I'll ride you this very night"
She had cast out her line
He'd taken the hook
A virgin no more
Crossed off in her book
written down
dressed to thrill
out on the town
Short skirt
Six inch heal
A beckoning smile
Virginity to steal
Heads would turn
and look her way
Some would follow
"What's the price" ill pay"!
A pause in her step
Smiling with delight
"For you anything baby"
"I'll ride you this very night"
She had cast out her line
He'd taken the hook
A virgin no more
Crossed off in her book
Published 23rd Aug 2012
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Anonymous
24th Aug 2012 11:37pm
Mr Depth,
I am normaly not a fan of ryme but you pulled it off, so I am a fan when you do it. I enjoyed your story here.
note: Is this line correct?
"What's the price" ill pay"!
Nice Job sire, I look forward to many more.
Al
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I am normaly not a fan of ryme but you pulled it off, so I am a fan when you do it. I enjoyed your story here.
note: Is this line correct?
"What's the price" ill pay"!
Nice Job sire, I look forward to many more.
Al
-x-
25th Aug 2012 11:54am
Yeah not sure of that line now you say it lol, i've done better stories using ryme but ty for your comment sir :-)
