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re: Re: Talk Dirty To Me
22nd Aug 2012 2:26am
Re: Talk Dirty To Me
22nd Aug 2012 2:33am
This is 22nd Century shit...I am way on this beat and cadence, but the voice tone is really on. This dizzy aspect of anyway you can puts a total rush on it that makes it magnetic..great combination of context and delivery. I'm there.
Where's the "Love It" button?
Where's the "Love It" button?
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re: Re: Talk Dirty To Me
22nd Aug 2012 2:27pm
RT have you become a groupy? lololol So glad you could relate to this piece; yes, this is the world we currently live in, where we work around the world and the people we want to be with are far, so we have had to make concessions to accommodate that fact. I for one can tell great stories about it. I thought the image made a good combo with the piece.
Thanks for the comment.
Red
Thanks for the comment.
Red
re: Re: Talk Dirty To Me
22nd Aug 2012 2:28pm
Re: Talk Dirty To Me
22nd Aug 2012 5:02am
re: Re: Talk Dirty To Me
22nd Aug 2012 2:32pm
Ms. chocolate; now this is surely a treat! Seeing as you are the undisputed queen of this genre a compliment from you is awesome, thank you so much for stopping by to read my little ditty.
Red
Red
Re: Talk Dirty To Me
22nd Aug 2012 8:49am
If you can't be with someone physically for whatever reason, this is the next best thing. And when done right it can come pretty close to the real thing. Great poem!
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re: Re: Talk Dirty To Me
22nd Aug 2012 2:34pm
Indeed there is an art to such a thing you just can say anything or risk being crass or sounding foolish, as in all things there must be finesse.
Thanks Scarlet for the great comment.
Red
Thanks Scarlet for the great comment.
Red
Talk Dirty To Me
22nd Aug 2012 9:27am
Great portrayal of how it is when it can't be, that phone wire can really get in the way sometimes lol.
A great piece Gypsy that many can relate to.
A great piece Gypsy that many can relate to.
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re: Talk Dirty To Me
22nd Aug 2012 2:36pm
Yes when you can't have what you want, take what you can get. lolol Thanks you Magda, you are always so sweet.
Red
Red
Re: Talk Dirty To Me
22nd Aug 2012 1:24pm
re: Re: Talk Dirty To Me
22nd Aug 2012 2:38pm
"Verbal foreplay" Oh I might have to borrow that, thanks for the comment Grace, I look forward to your opinions which I respect greatly.
Red
Red
Re: Talk Dirty To Me
Anonymous
22nd Aug 2012 2:26pm
Enough said, Red!
Strider :)
Strider :)
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re: Re: Talk Dirty To Me
22nd Aug 2012 2:40pm
Why Strider are you blushing? Some HOT steamy memory came to mind? Hmm? hahahahahah Just teasing ya hahaha could not resist. Thanks for the comment.
Red
Red
Re: Talk Dirty To Me
22nd Aug 2012 4:40pm
I'm only going to read this a few dozen more times, waiting for the sound track....Please.....
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re: Re: Talk Dirty To Me
22nd Aug 2012 4:45pm
LMAO ROTF TOO FUNNY BUT I LOVE IT! take a look at my other erotic pieces, you might find another you like. I am working on a two sigs and a drink piece as we speak. lolol have fun.
RED
RED
Re: Talk Dirty To Me
22nd Aug 2012 7:14pm
re: Re: Talk Dirty To Me
Well thank you, I don't what you have read but there are others just as good if not better than me, but I am very happy you liked it; thank you for reading my humble piece and for the great comment.
Red
Red
Re: Talk Dirty To Me
22nd Aug 2012 11:54pm
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23rd Aug 2012 00:05am
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23rd Aug 2012 00:10am
When my lady and I try doing this the hardest part is getting over the immediate desire to giggle or feel foolish ... but after that!
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23rd Aug 2012 1:13am
Re: Talk Dirty To Me
23rd Aug 2012 2:33am
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23rd Aug 2012 3:40pm