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Souls of the Sky
The night reveals shining souls.
They all glitter,
and dance
across their bed of black satin
for everyone’s enjoyment.
I look upon those souls,
and I speak to a few in particular,
telling them I love them,
and just talking.
For they need someone to talk to them
without wishes.
They all glitter,
and dance
across their bed of black satin
for everyone’s enjoyment.
I look upon those souls,
and I speak to a few in particular,
telling them I love them,
and just talking.
For they need someone to talk to them
without wishes.
Published 5th Aug 2012
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5th Aug 2012 8:59am
What a sweet poem! It made me feel like a little kid again, reading it. Back when the stars did indeed seem like bright, smiling spirits. And who is to say that they do not possess souls of their own? Mayhaps all things in the universe do, for all we know. If more people talked to the stars and loved them as joyfully as you do in your poem... then this world, surely, would be a far happier place. ;)
5th Aug 2012 2:52pm
Thank you, and I agree, who knows what the stars possess?
I don't just love them joyfully in the poem, I love them to the moon and back (no "pun" intended)
I don't just love them joyfully in the poem, I love them to the moon and back (no "pun" intended)
5th Aug 2012 6:03pm
Cheyenne this is beautiful, you're amazing and talented and number 1 on my tumblr crush list(the equalivilent of a DUP reading list) lol
