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Hiding in Trees
The beauty of her mother's smile
the vibrant blue of her eyes
little girl sees it less than more
beyond her years, so wise
The shimmering of the morning sun
reflecting on rippling waves
the footprints on the sand she makes
mom dare not misbehave
The rustle of the tall green trees
the beautiful song of a bird
it flies overhead, stretching its wings
the cries of abuse unheard
Dreading bedtime's unleashed fear
reality she shouldn't know
arguments brewing, the sound of a fist
as mommy takes another blow
Burying her head under pillows
she tries to muffle the sound
the screams and curses slam the wall
no escape from him is found
Reels of memory replay the pain
as the cycle begins anew
her own little girl now cowers in fear
as daddy beats mommy blue
Should be free as the bird flying above
free as the sea, so wild
yet innocence stolen once again
as seen through the eyes of a child
the vibrant blue of her eyes
little girl sees it less than more
beyond her years, so wise
The shimmering of the morning sun
reflecting on rippling waves
the footprints on the sand she makes
mom dare not misbehave
The rustle of the tall green trees
the beautiful song of a bird
it flies overhead, stretching its wings
the cries of abuse unheard
Dreading bedtime's unleashed fear
reality she shouldn't know
arguments brewing, the sound of a fist
as mommy takes another blow
Burying her head under pillows
she tries to muffle the sound
the screams and curses slam the wall
no escape from him is found
Reels of memory replay the pain
as the cycle begins anew
her own little girl now cowers in fear
as daddy beats mommy blue
Should be free as the bird flying above
free as the sea, so wild
yet innocence stolen once again
as seen through the eyes of a child
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Hiding in Trees
29th Jul 2012 8:50pm
Poignant but so beautifully penned, makes me think of my young son (nearly a teenager now)
A wonderful profound write Ken.
A wonderful profound write Ken.
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30th Jul 2012 00:18am
Tragic any child endures such wickedness. We never know the effects this will have on children.
Thank you Magdalena.
Thank you Magdalena.
Re: Hiding in Trees
29th Jul 2012 8:52pm
Hmmm A tragic reality for too many children and abused people. A good conscientious piece many people need to read.
Red
Red
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re: Re: Hiding in Trees
30th Jul 2012 00:21am
Yes it is. While society is more aware, still MUCH is hidden out of shame or fear.
Re: Hiding in Trees
29th Jul 2012 9:41pm
Ohhh, this is so well written. This has to be one of your best poem's to date. Excellent job at getting into the mind of a child.
Your words are harrowing and true.
Your words are harrowing and true.
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re: Re: Hiding in Trees
30th Jul 2012 00:27am
Thank you very much Rachel. Greatly appreciated. Abuse affects beyond the physical/verbal/emotional moment.
Re: Hiding in Trees
29th Jul 2012 10:10pm
A reality I wish no one had to experience.
Terribly sad poem and written so well.
Great job
Terribly sad poem and written so well.
Great job
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30th Jul 2012 00:28am
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29th Jul 2012 10:16pm
A difficult subject handled extremely well about a sadly all too common (behind closed doors)state of affairs.
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re: Re: Hiding in Trees
30th Jul 2012 00:29am
Very true Harlequin. Abuse of any kind should be dealt with severely. Thanks
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Anonymous
29th Jul 2012 11:08pm
Wonderful poem. You have lead the reader gently into facing a widespread problem - wife abuse...which does not only traumatize the woman, but also the daughter. The little girl, having no good father image to grow up with, is more likely to marry a similar, abusive man.
Thank you for telling the truth so well.
Thank you for telling the truth so well.

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re: Re: Hiding in Trees
30th Jul 2012 00:32am
Yes, that is how the piece ends, her daughter seeing the same situation. Such cycles are often repeated...by both abuser and victim. Very sad. Thank you Kitty.
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30th Jul 2012 2:26am
Omgoodness, I loved this poem. Evocative. Smooth flow. Your play on words and the flamboyant picture you paint.
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Anonymous
30th Jul 2012 5:55pm
And, again and again, the suffering continues.
An excellent expose on a sad subject Soul Man....
Strider :)
An excellent expose on a sad subject Soul Man....
Strider :)

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