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BALD and PROUD
Being a slave to society's whimsical tune about beauty
I conformed by buying hair that was not mine
Taken from the heads of people in foreign lands
Convinced their contribution will be paid back by GOD.
The long tresses I wore despite the guilt
Agonizing headaches from it being sewed in
I look in the mirror disgusted by my hypocrisy
After all, I tell everyone be yourself and be free
Living with this internal struggle is irritating
10+ years back and forth with my troubled emotions
No more hypocrisy; besides, when did I start to care what any one thought?
In the barber chair I sat and said down to the skin
My beauty is not just the outside, but starts within
The deed is done and my head looks like Kojak
I am free now and will never look back
I allowed alopecia to stop me from living my life
Another obstacle that is overcome, no more self pity or strife
I stand tall and want you to hear me very loud
Before you still stand a beauty; I am BALD and Proud
I conformed by buying hair that was not mine
Taken from the heads of people in foreign lands
Convinced their contribution will be paid back by GOD.
The long tresses I wore despite the guilt
Agonizing headaches from it being sewed in
I look in the mirror disgusted by my hypocrisy
After all, I tell everyone be yourself and be free
Living with this internal struggle is irritating
10+ years back and forth with my troubled emotions
No more hypocrisy; besides, when did I start to care what any one thought?
In the barber chair I sat and said down to the skin
My beauty is not just the outside, but starts within
The deed is done and my head looks like Kojak
I am free now and will never look back
I allowed alopecia to stop me from living my life
Another obstacle that is overcome, no more self pity or strife
I stand tall and want you to hear me very loud
Before you still stand a beauty; I am BALD and Proud
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Re: I am BALD and PROUD
28th Jul 2012 6:27pm
"allo Picha" "Hi Kym"
I do like reading your work kym.
always from the heart.
welcome back. :)
I do like reading your work kym.
always from the heart.
welcome back. :)
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re: Re: I am BALD and PROUD
28th Jul 2012 7:18pm
Re: I am BALD and PROUD
Oh Kym. Congratulations on finally freeing yourself. I am so proud of you!
Why do you not write more frequently? I have missed you.
This is a very inspiring piece. So many vain women in the world worried about a pimple that eventually goes away, and here you are, a woman embracing baldness.
I applaud you.
I am so glad to see you here. I hope to see more from you. Everything you write inspires.
XxXx
Why do you not write more frequently? I have missed you.
This is a very inspiring piece. So many vain women in the world worried about a pimple that eventually goes away, and here you are, a woman embracing baldness.
I applaud you.
I am so glad to see you here. I hope to see more from you. Everything you write inspires.
XxXx
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re: Re: I am BALD and PROUD
28th Jul 2012 7:19pm
Rachel,
Thank you for the wonderful comment.
I lost my motivation to write for awhile. It has come back.
Until next time.
Thank you for the wonderful comment.
I lost my motivation to write for awhile. It has come back.
Until next time.
Re: BALD and PROUD
Anonymous
28th Jul 2012 8:02pm
Kym - you are back! I was wondering where you were. Baldness is familial and both young men and young women sometimes have it. Now they can get the hair to regrow at great expense. But your poem is a testament to self-acceptance, which is so hard to find when in some way, even some very small way, you differ from others.
The poem shows you to have come to terms with it in a very positive way and I admire that.
Welcome back
Kitty
The poem shows you to have come to terms with it in a very positive way and I admire that.
Welcome back
Kitty
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re: Re: BALD and PROUD
28th Jul 2012 10:04pm
Kitty,
Thank you also for the welcome back. It really does feel good to be back.
I will post my pic as soon as I can make it small enough.
Thank you also for the welcome back. It really does feel good to be back.
I will post my pic as soon as I can make it small enough.
Re: BALD and PROUD
28th Jul 2012 9:00pm
Well I'd suck the hell out of your head and skull and face and lips regardless of what you had or didnt on them.. so does this mean the kitty kat below is bald as well. just wondering because i'd suck the hell out of that too. much love baby .. i used to get the sewing thing too. fuck all that. my hair finally started to grow out and then i tried dying the tips (just the tips) black and ended up looking like a skunk so i just said fuck it and died it all black,... can you picture me blonde?.. me either anymore... lol. oh and she is bald as well.. so what about dinner?.. lol love you kym you were my first here. still have night time sweats thinkin about it you dirty girl...
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Re: BALD and PROUD
28th Jul 2012 10:08pm
My baby devilish. I will never forget when you first joined and we clicked right away. FYI I do get brazillians so yes they match (lol).
In terms of dinner, I am all yours.
Love you more.
One lick and then a kiss.....Muahhhh
In terms of dinner, I am all yours.
Love you more.
One lick and then a kiss.....Muahhhh
Re: BALD and PROUD
Anonymous
31st Jul 2012 5:26pm
Kym,
Welcome back! I have to admit the title of this one, and being from you, drew me in ; )
You line says it all:
"My beauty is not just the outside, but starts within"
Enjoyed!
tornado
Welcome back! I have to admit the title of this one, and being from you, drew me in ; )
You line says it all:
"My beauty is not just the outside, but starts within"
Enjoyed!
tornado
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re: Re: BALD and PROUD
2nd Aug 2012 12:32pm
I will send you a special version of bald and proud.
You know I luv u Tornado.
Muahhh
You know I luv u Tornado.
Muahhh
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Anonymous
2nd Aug 2012 11:05pm
Whoa!....burn me down.....; )
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Anonymous
5th Aug 2012 2:14pm
If you don't mind my saying so?...Yea! makes me want to feel the soft smooth skin with both my palms and the hairy backs of my hands...to experience your newly realized pride.
Such a powerful comment on self acceptance...Tell It!
Such a powerful comment on self acceptance...Tell It!
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5th Aug 2012 11:01pm
Re: BALD and PROUD
6th Aug 2012 5:43am
Lucious lady i'm losing my hair because the meds I take you are much braver then me and such a beautiful soul embracing your true loveliness..I love you peace Crim
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6th Aug 2012 10:30am