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broken skylines
Broken skylines
shattered sunsets
the moon watches
from far above
colors explode
pink and orange
melt in puddles
a subtle burgandy
twists and twirls
in a white mist
streaming slowly down
to our land
we watch confused
shattered sunsets
the moon watches
from far above
colors explode
pink and orange
melt in puddles
a subtle burgandy
twists and twirls
in a white mist
streaming slowly down
to our land
we watch confused
Published 24th Jul 2012
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Anonymous
24th Jul 2012 4:57pm
I get it jared.
Nice poem.
Strider :)
Nice poem.
Strider :)
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Anonymous
24th Jul 2012 5:13pm
You are a natural poet....linking words together to make a whole that is like a map pointing to the answer.
Welcome new member....I look forward to reading what you write
Peace
Kitty
Welcome new member....I look forward to reading what you write
Peace
Kitty
24th Jul 2012 5:31pm
thanks im 33 years old and have been writing since a child...I literally have a thousand poems or so but im putting favorites on this site!.I once was published.......anyways ur mind and thoughts are so intricate... thanks again
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24th Jul 2012 8:42pm
This is so subtle, but so epic at the same time. I'm so in love with it.
25th Jul 2012 10:50am
absolutely love this,my type of stuff,GOOD OLD sYD BARRETT would have liked this and so do i
