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The Kiss
Love drips
your lips are liquid
an ocean of beauty
i swim your waves
tunnels hidden inside
built of crystals
an amethyst dream
i swim further
reaching your eyes
watching the sunlight
reflect an intricate green
an emerald paradise
broken in peices
tiny gems i find
each one is you
suddenly i open my eyes
we end the kiss
i look at you
if you only knew
what existed inside
your lips are liquid
an ocean of beauty
i swim your waves
tunnels hidden inside
built of crystals
an amethyst dream
i swim further
reaching your eyes
watching the sunlight
reflect an intricate green
an emerald paradise
broken in peices
tiny gems i find
each one is you
suddenly i open my eyes
we end the kiss
i look at you
if you only knew
what existed inside
Published 23rd Jul 2012
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23rd Jul 2012 6:29pm
23rd Jul 2012 7:05pm
Anonymous
24th Jul 2012 4:58pm
Really nice one here jared!
Strider :)
Strider :)
24th Jul 2012 5:23pm
Anonymous
24th Jul 2012 6:08pm
absofucknlutely can relate. Dynamite!
24th Jul 2012 8:34pm
25th Jul 2012 10:51am
Anonymous
29th Jul 2012 11:09am
I kind of think you could end this more effectively at 'suddenly I open my eyes'. The lines after that are erroneous and detract from the graceful fluidity of the piece.
Wonderful imagery.
Wonderful imagery.
