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Do we dream together
kingdoms so beautiful we cry
islands in the skies that claim destiny
beyond the rain soaked clouds
do we seal our fate
is it all part of a master plan
or is the key in the heavens
a golden prize i must wait for
do we trust the creator
as he molds us like clay sculptures
forming the avenues of our lives
teaching us these complex designs
kingdoms so beautiful we cry
islands in the skies that claim destiny
beyond the rain soaked clouds
do we seal our fate
is it all part of a master plan
or is the key in the heavens
a golden prize i must wait for
do we trust the creator
as he molds us like clay sculptures
forming the avenues of our lives
teaching us these complex designs
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Re: our designs
22nd Jul 2012 11:56pm
Re: our designs
23rd Jul 2012 3:26am
My God, this is epic. It's so grand, lovely...you've definetly made me think. Love it!
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23rd Jul 2012 7:08pm
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24th Jul 2012 5:24pm
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24th Jul 2012 7:30pm
I have to say... I love your work.. Its beautiful and I think anyone can enjoy it
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Re: our designs
25th Jul 2012 10:53am
you are interesting,i like your words,you know how to say what life and feelings are,you are very relevant and a breath of fresh air
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27th Jul 2012 1:18am
And with each step of destiny
Our paths already forged a step ahead of us
While before our eyes all still lies in the darkness of unknown adventures
Woven in the twists and turns
Our paths already forged a step ahead of us
While before our eyes all still lies in the darkness of unknown adventures
Woven in the twists and turns
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