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Puzzle me
My life
was made of tiny puzzle pieces
Never
has anyone
tried to put them together
Not even myself.
Published 21st Jul 2012
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21st Jul 2012 7:47am
It's kind of sad. No one has tried to figure you out, nor have you tried to figure yourself out.
I love when someone can say a lot with so few words. Good job.
I love when someone can say a lot with so few words. Good job.
21st Jul 2012 2:45pm
Ty sis. Sometimes I feel
Like they should have a quote section. Seems like a quote more then a poem.
Like they should have a quote section. Seems like a quote more then a poem.
24th Jul 2012 5:42pm
are u on facebook if u are u can see my band and my pics and well just who i am.....if u go on type Jared Pakler..iy should pull up a pic of me with gutiar
21st Jul 2012 7:53am
Strong. I've spent much of my life bounding around in my head trying to discern who that guy is living my life.
21st Jul 2012 2:46pm
21st Jul 2012 7:06pm
this is profound Gg you say so much that speaks to the soul..I haven't yet figured myself out either..powerful..peace Crim :)
21st Jul 2012 8:09pm
Gigi.
well you are getting quite the profound little green horn.
fair play. looks good, reads good.
edid;
I'd probably change 'was to is :)
well you are getting quite the profound little green horn.
fair play. looks good, reads good.
edid;
I'd probably change 'was to is :)
22nd Jul 2012 1:30am
See I'm green too :<) lol thanks so much for all your help. My fav dude on dup .. Xoxo
Anonymous
21st Jul 2012 11:47pm
E-x-c-e-l-l-e-n-t:)
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29th Jul 2012 11:11am
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29th Jul 2012 3:04pm
But it's a puzzle, you don't analyze puzzles until they're done. Usually. But you do work on how to put them together. Anyways thanks :-)
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30th Jul 2012 6:12am
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Anonymous
30th Aug 2012 00:30am
Maybe some of your pieces are missing?
I have some extra pieces maybe their yours?
Maybe we are meant to be together ?
Haha sorry I'm out of my mind
Great job, awesome poem
I have some extra pieces maybe their yours?
Maybe we are meant to be together ?
Haha sorry I'm out of my mind
Great job, awesome poem
30th Aug 2012 00:37am
Anonymous
30th Aug 2012 00:59am
Like it! and I hope to..:)
30th Aug 2012 1:03am
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