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Tiny Heart
Tiny Heart,
Beating inside my own. A mother you shall make of this goth girl.
The thought of having a baby, and that wanting of a child.
It was growing in my heart as you grew inside of my life.
Dreams and reality collide and I am aware of nothing else.
But the heart beat that is so foreign,
And yet so familiar to me at the same time.
Tiny Heart,
Holding me together, when al I want is to fall apart.
Filling my heart with a new warmth that I didn't know I could ever feel.
Tiny Heart,
Resting inside of my soul.
Save me from the darkness that is my old sorrows.
Tiny Heart,
I love you.
And so does your daddy.
You make us stronger, no matter what others may say.
Tiny Heart,
Beating inside my own.
All I feel is the little thumping in my womb.
All I hear is the little heart beat that is so foreign,
And yet so familiar to me at the same time.
Shhhh.... I love you Tiny Heart, everything will be okay.
Beating inside my own. A mother you shall make of this goth girl.
The thought of having a baby, and that wanting of a child.
It was growing in my heart as you grew inside of my life.
Dreams and reality collide and I am aware of nothing else.
But the heart beat that is so foreign,
And yet so familiar to me at the same time.
Tiny Heart,
Holding me together, when al I want is to fall apart.
Filling my heart with a new warmth that I didn't know I could ever feel.
Tiny Heart,
Resting inside of my soul.
Save me from the darkness that is my old sorrows.
Tiny Heart,
I love you.
And so does your daddy.
You make us stronger, no matter what others may say.
Tiny Heart,
Beating inside my own.
All I feel is the little thumping in my womb.
All I hear is the little heart beat that is so foreign,
And yet so familiar to me at the same time.
Shhhh.... I love you Tiny Heart, everything will be okay.
Published 13th Jul 2012
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18th Jul 2012 7:38pm
Nicely written poem, very touching and tender. The only change I would suggest is to drop "when all I want is to fall apart." This part of a line is completely different, antithetical to all else you say. A great read, with wonderful art.
marcella1
marcella1
21st Jul 2012 5:21am
awww i love it
i lke the diffrent line "when all I want is to fall apart."
its like how a person would feel and no life and a person isnt perfect i love it :)
i lke the diffrent line "when all I want is to fall apart."
its like how a person would feel and no life and a person isnt perfect i love it :)
1st Aug 2012 2:51pm
I especially like "Dreams and reality collide." It's true: or we can make it so. Very lyrical and touching poem.
marcella1
marcella1
