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A summer glow
Beads of sweat, Trickling down her satin skinned legs
Each sun ray hugging her body like a blanket
Scent of coconut filling the air
She looks like a child's drawing
Laying there stalk still
basking in the summer day
Carefree and though imperfect
Stunning as ever
And she's not even aware of her beautiful glow
Each sun ray hugging her body like a blanket
Scent of coconut filling the air
She looks like a child's drawing
Laying there stalk still
basking in the summer day
Carefree and though imperfect
Stunning as ever
And she's not even aware of her beautiful glow
Published 21st Jun 2012
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Anonymous
21st Jun 2012 3:46am
short yet so sexy :) I liked this
21st Jun 2012 3:49am
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21st Jun 2012 10:58am
Hey G. Nice poem I like it. Might add one word though.
Carefree, and though imperfect
Stunning as ever.
Other than the one possible word... very good.
Carefree, and though imperfect
Stunning as ever.
Other than the one possible word... very good.
21st Jun 2012 2:44pm
Thank you love :-) I think you added the missing piece. This one I kept re reading and something was missing. Sounds about right. Thank you
21st Jun 2012 11:47am
A delectably beautiful canvas in short verse. Ahhhhh......might this be you? Wishes.....
Summer Madness : )
Summer Madness : )
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28th Jun 2012 3:42am
I like that I had to use my imagination to picture
the sweet fluids rolling down her leg. I liked it!
the sweet fluids rolling down her leg. I liked it!
28th Jun 2012 3:48am
