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Oooooooooh Sheeeeeeeet !!!!!!!!!!
"Oh she may be weary
Them young girls they do get wearied
Wearing that same old shabby dress
But when she gets weary
Try a little tenderness......."
Young and dumb
Full of cum
We reflect on the memories
of our sorted past.
.......but some of the memories seem to haunt us forever.
They last, and last and last....
New job, new town
Sylvia was amongst the first of the new faces that I found.
Now I'm not really a shallow type of fellow
No, most of the time I'm laid back, cool and mellow.
She definitely wasn't the prettiest lady in this little southern town......
......but hey, I'm a pro and I like to flirt.
She's single and likes to mingle so what will it hurt?
The distance from my job to my place was 35 miles away.
She picked up on that morsel and said to me one day......
"You know, I kinda' dig you Music
You work hard, for real.
Sweetie let me invite you over to my place
for a good, home-cooked meal.
We'll have some stuffed pork chop
Saute some Zucchini, some fresh bread-that'll work
and then the piece-de-resistance'
A very special dessert......"
Well, about 5 o'clock, I'm walking through her door.
The place smelled really, really good.
She's layed a spread out on the floor.
Everything was laid out
just like she said it would be.
The meal so far is delicious
and after a couple glasses of wine, she started to
"look" pretty damned good to me.
She wore this little Coca Cola Shirt.
Across her breast were the words "It's The Real Thing".
And she had some big , old pretty legs
spilling from some small, tight shorts
held up by a little, bitty old drawstring.
(......which was already loose by the way)
"Let me go on back here and get your desert ready."
I watched her round derriere bounce to and fro.
In minutes, she called "come and get it".
I followed her voice to a dimly-lit room with an open door....
The room was illuminated with hundreds of candles and incense
Sylvia lay naked on the bed
Her oiled skin shimmered in the faint light
and without another word said......
.......I joined her.
I could tell it had been a long time
She got me out of my clothes so damned fast
It completely blew my mind.........
(......and just as quick, she begin to suck and pump my rapidly, growing dick.)
She was determined to take me "around the world in a day"
Swung her hips around to a "69"-my lips mark the spot.
With a little bump and grind, we wasted precious little time
getting each other very, very hot.
My dick was harder than calculus
and her pussy was so deliciously wet.
Before I knew it, my hands were wrapped around her ankles
and her legs opened as wide as they could get.
She looked in my eyes......a gaze that said to me
"We gonna' be rolling in the deep"
Before I drove this dick deep inside her, I just had to taste her.....
phat, juicy, hot, horny mmm mmmm mmmmm.........
That "pussy meat".
I relaxed my grip on her legs for just a minute
and my big lips and talented tongue began their assault.
A slow, delicious massage on her puffy lips, wet slit and swollen clit.
Grinding her hips furiously into the mattress.
Insaitiable.....deep moans and groans!
Her beautiful long nails dug deep into my flesh
I thought babygirl was loosing it.
You know the man in me was feeling like the damn king!
Right then and there,
this sound began to eminate.
Vague rumblings from deep within .....her belly.
I wondered was it something that we ate....
(.....that thought only lasted but a moment)
I just kept on eating that "good and plenty"
I aim to please and babygirl gonna' bust this nut.
Wave after wave of sensual vaginal contractions
I slowly pressed my finger deep into her butt!!
(Man, didn't it rain, didn't it rain?)
A strange sensation of pressure
began to build up inside
Again I heard those distant rumblings....
as my finger started it's retrograde backwards slide.
Fingers punishing that tight puckered hole,
I felt it start to happen.
Her body tensed sharply as she's
all over the bed just a thrashin' !
"Heyell to the Yeah!! You bout to cum sweet thang!"
Furiously I'm massaging her swollen, sexy big clit
positioning my face so that I can see the fireworks....and then
"Oooooooooh Sheetttt!".......the words erupted from her lips.
The rumblings from her tummy grew louder.....
"Oooooooooh Sheetttt!".......exploded from her big ass.....
.......violently she began to thrust those hips
gripping my head tightly between her smelly, brown, shitty thighs!
Came so hard till she fell off the bed
Creamy brown scat all over my face
Filling up my nostrils, covering up my eyes.....(damn, damn, damn!)
And so it goes.......
If ever you hear that distant chocolate thunder rumbling
and you find yourself "rolling in the deep"
Brother's and sisters, please heed the warning.......
When she screams......."Ooooooooooh Sheeeeeettttt!!"
Them young girls they do get wearied
Wearing that same old shabby dress
But when she gets weary
Try a little tenderness......."
Young and dumb
Full of cum
We reflect on the memories
of our sorted past.
.......but some of the memories seem to haunt us forever.
They last, and last and last....
New job, new town
Sylvia was amongst the first of the new faces that I found.
Now I'm not really a shallow type of fellow
No, most of the time I'm laid back, cool and mellow.
She definitely wasn't the prettiest lady in this little southern town......
......but hey, I'm a pro and I like to flirt.
She's single and likes to mingle so what will it hurt?
The distance from my job to my place was 35 miles away.
She picked up on that morsel and said to me one day......
"You know, I kinda' dig you Music
You work hard, for real.
Sweetie let me invite you over to my place
for a good, home-cooked meal.
We'll have some stuffed pork chop
Saute some Zucchini, some fresh bread-that'll work
and then the piece-de-resistance'
A very special dessert......"
Well, about 5 o'clock, I'm walking through her door.
The place smelled really, really good.
She's layed a spread out on the floor.
Everything was laid out
just like she said it would be.
The meal so far is delicious
and after a couple glasses of wine, she started to
"look" pretty damned good to me.
She wore this little Coca Cola Shirt.
Across her breast were the words "It's The Real Thing".
And she had some big , old pretty legs
spilling from some small, tight shorts
held up by a little, bitty old drawstring.
(......which was already loose by the way)
"Let me go on back here and get your desert ready."
I watched her round derriere bounce to and fro.
In minutes, she called "come and get it".
I followed her voice to a dimly-lit room with an open door....
The room was illuminated with hundreds of candles and incense
Sylvia lay naked on the bed
Her oiled skin shimmered in the faint light
and without another word said......
.......I joined her.
I could tell it had been a long time
She got me out of my clothes so damned fast
It completely blew my mind.........
(......and just as quick, she begin to suck and pump my rapidly, growing dick.)
She was determined to take me "around the world in a day"
Swung her hips around to a "69"-my lips mark the spot.
With a little bump and grind, we wasted precious little time
getting each other very, very hot.
My dick was harder than calculus
and her pussy was so deliciously wet.
Before I knew it, my hands were wrapped around her ankles
and her legs opened as wide as they could get.
She looked in my eyes......a gaze that said to me
"We gonna' be rolling in the deep"
Before I drove this dick deep inside her, I just had to taste her.....
phat, juicy, hot, horny mmm mmmm mmmmm.........
That "pussy meat".
I relaxed my grip on her legs for just a minute
and my big lips and talented tongue began their assault.
A slow, delicious massage on her puffy lips, wet slit and swollen clit.
Grinding her hips furiously into the mattress.
Insaitiable.....deep moans and groans!
Her beautiful long nails dug deep into my flesh
I thought babygirl was loosing it.
You know the man in me was feeling like the damn king!
Right then and there,
this sound began to eminate.
Vague rumblings from deep within .....her belly.
I wondered was it something that we ate....
(.....that thought only lasted but a moment)
I just kept on eating that "good and plenty"
I aim to please and babygirl gonna' bust this nut.
Wave after wave of sensual vaginal contractions
I slowly pressed my finger deep into her butt!!
(Man, didn't it rain, didn't it rain?)
A strange sensation of pressure
began to build up inside
Again I heard those distant rumblings....
as my finger started it's retrograde backwards slide.
Fingers punishing that tight puckered hole,
I felt it start to happen.
Her body tensed sharply as she's
all over the bed just a thrashin' !
"Heyell to the Yeah!! You bout to cum sweet thang!"
Furiously I'm massaging her swollen, sexy big clit
positioning my face so that I can see the fireworks....and then
"Oooooooooh Sheetttt!".......the words erupted from her lips.
The rumblings from her tummy grew louder.....
"Oooooooooh Sheetttt!".......exploded from her big ass.....
.......violently she began to thrust those hips
gripping my head tightly between her smelly, brown, shitty thighs!
Came so hard till she fell off the bed
Creamy brown scat all over my face
Filling up my nostrils, covering up my eyes.....(damn, damn, damn!)
And so it goes.......
If ever you hear that distant chocolate thunder rumbling
and you find yourself "rolling in the deep"
Brother's and sisters, please heed the warning.......
When she screams......."Ooooooooooh Sheeeeeettttt!!"
Published 14th Jun 2012
| Edited 15th Jun 2012
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14th Jun 2012 5:14pm
14th Jun 2012 5:21pm
LMBAO!!!! Pretty? Damn GG I told you to lay off the Moscato!! Thank you for the comment. I love the song too......just wish the situation had been a little different and.......
......this is true, sad to say. ; )
......this is true, sad to say. ; )
15th Jun 2012 3:02am
Anonymous
14th Jun 2012 6:31pm
MrM!!!!
ROTFLMBO!!! NO say it ain't true. I know you said itwais, but please tell me it isn't!!! I'm sorry brother, I don't mean to laugh....but DAMN!!! LOL!!! Is it OK if I say I enjoyed the read???!!!
tornado
ROTFLMBO!!! NO say it ain't true. I know you said itwais, but please tell me it isn't!!! I'm sorry brother, I don't mean to laugh....but DAMN!!! LOL!!! Is it OK if I say I enjoyed the read???!!!
tornado
14th Jun 2012 7:49pm
Yep.......it's true! Ok, so it didn't get in my eyes but it did get on my face and hands! ROFL!!!
Actually saw ol' girl a couple of months ago......from a distance : )
Actually saw ol' girl a couple of months ago......from a distance : )
14th Jun 2012 7:33pm
14th Jun 2012 7:33pm
14th Jun 2012 7:51pm
LMAO! Please don't tell me this is true! lol...Hoping your creative imagination fabricated this for pure entertainment! lollol...Too Funny! Enjoyed it immensely! :-)
14th Jun 2012 7:57pm
Yes it happened.......slightly embellished but yes it happened. I even remember the date and time!! 9/15/85 somewhere around 9:00 pm @Shannon Manor apt 311! LOL
14th Jun 2012 8:01pm
Oh lawd! WOW!lol.. The worst days of our lives are usually unforgettable ones! Good read though!
17th Jun 2012 11:57am
Well fuck. I did not expect that ending.
I probably would have died inside.
Still a great poem.
I probably would have died inside.
Still a great poem.
18th Jun 2012 6:23pm
Brilliant!! Truly brilliant sir and, as we say in the UK, I doff my cap to you. Absolutely loved the flow and pace and that ending, fantastic!!
18th Jun 2012 6:36pm
17th Feb 2013 3:01pm
LMDAOOO!!! This story is hilarious MrM. I'm sorry this happend to you, unless you actually enjoyed having s*** all over your nostrils! Jajajajajaja... Great story! Thanks:-)
17th Feb 2013 3:07pm
I knew something weird was about to happen in this poem as soon as I saw the picture sitting on the toilet! LMDAO! I can't stop laughing! My 5yr old is playing his DS next to me and is asking me, "what's so funny Mami?"....
